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ladyjewel

RE: I'm Lost in Hidden Melodies

*It's like searching for a ghost
Although I feel them in my soul
I follow the notes that I hear
But they disappear like melting snow*

This is just about perfect, I feel it so deeply in my soul and as you hold out your hand and begin to trust that it's real, it disappears like melting snow lips
carlamee

RE: woman in the poster

Nice poems.

Sounds like you have a few regrets. dunno

RE: woman in the poster

Very beautiful and sad.

Kathy

RE: A rolling Reverend

Good job Ocean - reminds me of the hymn "Onward Christian Soldiers":
1 Onward Christian soldiers! Marching as to war, With the cross of Jesus Going on before. Christ, the royal Master, Leads against the foe; Forward into battle, See, His banners go!
Refrain: Onward, Christian soldiers! Marching as to war, With the cross of Jesus, Going on before.

2 At the name of Jesus Satan’s host doth flee; On then, Christian soldiers, On to victory!
Hell’s foundations quiver At the shout of praise: Brothers, lift your voices, Loud your anthems raise!
Refrain: Refrain: Onward, Christian soldiers! Marching as to war, With the cross of Jesus, Going on before.

3 Like a mighty army Moves the Church of God: Brothers, we are treading Where the saints have trod; We are not divided, All one Body we— One in faith and Spirit, One eternally.
Refrain: Refrain: Onward, Christian soldiers! Marching as to war, With the cross of Jesus, Going on before.

4 Crowns and thrones may perish, Kingdoms rise and wane; But the Church of Jesus
Constant will remain. Gates of hell can never ’Gainst the Church prevail; We have Christ’s own promise, Which can never fail.
Refrain: Refrain: Onward, Christian soldiers! Marching as to war, With the cross of Jesus, Going on before.

5 Onward, then, ye people! Join our happy throng; Blend with ours your voices In the triumph song.
Glory, laud and honor Unto Christ, the King; This through countless ages Men and angels sing.
Refrain: Refrain: Onward, Christian soldiers! Marching as to war, With the cross of Jesus, Going on before.
PassionateArtist

RE: A rolling Reverend

Dear Oceanzest,
Nicely Done !
Roll On !
Keep On Keeping On…
And Bring The Light !
David
heart beating :

RE: I'm Lost in Hidden Melodies

Very pictured your emotions. I am learning guitar, not to be famous but to one day be able to pour out a melody from my heart. SMwave wave
ManicCC

I'm Lost in Hidden Melodies

Not so much my frustration, rather the frustration of my D&D Bard.
Oceanzest
Oceanzest

RE: I'm Lost in Hidden Melodies

I sense your frustration ManicCC, I'm often trying to get a tune out of a guitar but it just won't gel dunno
salamuna

RE: Lemon tea for Derek

A kind of provoking one, oceandancing
carlamee

RE: Love

Ancient rhyme. Most people don't believe in that anymore.
carlamee

RE: Welcome to the lake

Nice poem.
They beauty of our environment.
PassionateArtist

An Intimate Relationship

Dear heart beating carlamee heart beating

Hello,

God Bless Your Dad !

Love David
heart beating
PassionateArtist

RE: Aging

Dear southmiami,
Nicely Done Dear ! I can relate, being Old…70 now !
And Yes You “Should” !
Please, Continue “Writing”with Such Insight as you Always Make Me
And Your Readers Laugggh laugh )))
Love David
heart beating

Aging

DiggableHippy49

Welcome to you and thanks for your comment.
Take Care.

Aging

ladyjewel

Yes, cherish those boxes.
Thanks for your comment,
carlamee

RE: Love and the night

thumbs up kudos for not taking credit for Chatgpt's work.
salamuna

RE: woman in the poster

Hi Ru.as usually a very beautiful ballad.loved it. Greetings, Lily applause
Oceanzest

Big Horse Heart

Thanking you Lily, hope all's well

Ocean angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel: angel:
salamuna

RE: After the war

definitely liked this. Atmospheric reflection of the era of the Great Gatsbyapplause
salamuna

RE: Big Horse Heart

A well-written picture of the sensations of a climber, ocean. Lily wave
Oceanzest

After the war

thanks SM, I was practicing the Charleston not so long ago, we were heading to an Art Deco festival here but a cyclone wiped out our holiday! wine
carlamee

RE: An Intimate Relationship

Hello David.

My school of taught are the same as yours.
I call him Jesus, Christ, Savior, God.

Here is a food for thought. My dad use to challenge the Jehovah witnesses when they came to our home with this question. "If God is three in one, then who was he speaking to when he was dying on the cross?"

Your thoughts???
PassionateArtist

An Intimate Relationship

Dear heart beating carlamee heart beating
Thank you Dear for commenting Here !
I Believe in a Triune God: God The Father, Jesus The Son (And Savior), and the Holy Spirit.
1-One God in three persons !
What Names Do You Use?
Love David
heart beating

RE: LIFE MOVES

angel handshake thumbs up Significant words! SM

RE: After the war

Ocean, I still remember my mother dancing the Charleston when that style of music popped up. Sure an uprise and down rise in those generations. Nice write. SM cheering

RE: LIFE MOVES

Very true Rustic! † † † angel
carlamee

RE: Grieving

My condolences for your lost.

Let your love one shine, but you still have some life to live, so live it.
carlamee

RE: The Day

Nice poem.

I think give up on a day bring a new day, new adventure.
carlamee

RE: An Intimate Relationship

Amen, although I would use different words when it comes to God.
salamuna

RE: The Day

yes, ocean.. that's what i did meanwave make a song out of it head banger
Angeldancer

It takes two to tango..

Yes, they do , maybe not tango but yes definitely! applause cheering
Oceanzest

The Day

Thanks team, no music there Lily but yeah could be a little guitar accompaniment peace
Yankee4you

RE: The Day

Inspiring poem about perseverance. At times life seems like such enduring challenge, only to change somewhat like the weather or in this case.....day versus night.

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