Haiku
In the haiku, "In shadows we roamed" sets the scene of a relationship that once existed, where the lovers were intertwined in each other's lives, sharing moments both bright and dark. "Echoes of love now faded" signifies that the intensity and passion of their love have diminished over time, leaving behind only faint remnants of what once was. Finally, "Lost souls find solace" suggests that despite the loss and heartache, there is still hope for healing and finding peace in the aftermath of lost love. It speaks to the resilience of the human spirit and the possibility of moving forward despite the pain.
haiku serenity
the sound of silence its mesmerising nature peaceful and serene
Haiku v Senryu
The subtle difference between Haiku & Senryu.
Drive Thru
Another haiku, I used to work fast food from 10/88 - 1/93, and I never had to work the drive thru.
Belmont Parade
Another haiku, another parade nine miles from the first parade that was in Platteville, Wisconsin, which is in the southwest corner of the state. This parade was in Belmont, Wisconsin. On Sunday, it's off to WI Dells!
Parade
Haiku on the parade I went to today on September 9, 2023 for Dairy Days in Platteville, Wisconsin.
Haiku
just a few for fun
1920's haiku
the feel of the jazz age
Aloneness explained
Haiku/ Senryu 3 lines 7-5-7 syllables
Attraction
When we first met...
It doesn’t wait
"Time waits on no one". A true saying...
Gathering Clouds in Moonlight (haiku)
Grey mountain of sky Eating valiant silver ships Wild drunk on moon blood
Mountain (haiku)
Like a fish bone knife Patiently gutting stray clouds For silver lining.
sleep
oh, just a lovely deep sleep
this winter it seems...
reluctant to get up - mid winter
humihinga pa
My bones seem to feel the cold this winter!
Full moon? East Australian night sky when walking home (2)
Just Australia's night sky, a constant, warm cool or cold.
In winter ...
a love departed
First day of winter
Antarctic cold blast, a fierce front, greeted the first day of winter; snowing in the tablelands, and down the coast. In Harbin in mid-winter I felt no colder, but I had dressed for it.
Senryu
Parental stress.
Senryu
nature inspired
Silence
as it has happened.
Frogs
trying to do my homework but tinnitus and frogs combined distract!
Sweet Release
Cadenced footsteps quicken A jangle of keys Now freedom and release. © lovecanbereal All rights reserved
Green Haiku
Green - the colour of life
Senryu x 3
mucking around
The Trial...
It seems senryu is taking over here temporarily. I thought I'd add a lighthearted attempt.
Against the Odds...Haiku.
A poem of hope for Ukraine.
oh heavy rain falls
Just telling it as it is.
there you are
A long time friend seen anew.
She
Yoko Ono haha
Traveling dreams
Joining the crowd, trying Senryu
Forever Love
Experimenting a little more with Haiku (nature) versus Senryu (feelings) .....5-7-5 format. Using a very structured format when writing poetry often helps to create such creativity and emphasis on words denoting feelings......amazing how descriptive language becomes....like music almost following conventions.
Again outside the steady rain
The rivers rise in rains like this and spread their cloaks over home and hearth
Lost Freedom
Once free,now lost.
It's frog and cricket night
As it happens
Senryu
ok I'm in too, gotta try this..
First Glance (Senryu)
In tribute to Socrates........".thanks for enlightening me to this sub-form of Haiku-like style "
Unrequited Love
Just thoughts
Rainy nights
Seemingly endless rains and floods - steady hissing rain has just resumed and frogs are silenced.
RE: A Secret Love.
Hi cafe, thanks for dropping by and the comment, well let's see how I last this time. I always Love to have my child dreams, as I call them, they are always so complete. Sometimes I like to go back. I did so Love my dreams. Have a good day. Catch yo...
RE: Melodia Celeste
Love it. Beautiful melody...
RE: Now......Then
sundayrose thanks for your comment. i was glad i put your imagination to work. Mine is always in play....
RE: lady toulouse
only ladies comments ..flattered Iam..I love you all !...
RE: Who's Viewed You?!!
Ty gnj..lol. I guess its more like WHAT'S coming to dinner..Thanks for your comment.....
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