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Jun 24, 2010 3:39 PM CSTInteractive story: Part One.
Joseph_Mack
Joseph_MackJoseph_MackDenver, Colorado, USA16 Threads 4 Polls 177 Posts

Interactive story: Part One.(Vote Below)

- (To Vote: select an option above, then press this button)
Call the phone number?
1
4%
Research the address?
5
22%
Just fly to the out of state location?
0
0%
Email her back?
5
22%
Delete the message without giving a reply?
1
4%
Ask a friend for advice?
2
9%
Go get a drink and think about it?
2
9%
Return a phone call from his ex?
1
4%
Keep checking other emails?
1
4%
Go out and get something to eat?
5
22%
Total Votes
23
Ok, so this is how it is going to work. I will begin a story, then have some options for continuing that story, in other words, the story will continue based upon the most popular selection that is listed. All you have to do is read what I have written and make a selection. I will wait three days to allow for voting, then write the next part of the story using another poll until the story loses interest, comes to a conclusion, I get tired, or I run out of time lol.

So, with that said, lets begin.




Sam Holdings, a renowned treasure hunter, sat in his office going over his daily emails. And as he did, he came across one that automatically caught his eye. It was from a lady who simply identified herself as Mary.

At first, before opening it, he thought she was just another scammer of sorts trying to get a hold of his holdings, but as he read the email he became less and less convince that this was so.

Inside the email he found a phone number, an out of state address, and a roundtrip airline ticket.


What does he do next? dunno
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Jun 24, 2010 4:31 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
................and asks himself,why did that have to be a Poll?laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 4:37 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
cherrybrandy
cherrybrandycherrybrandycambridge, Cambridgeshire, England UK24 Threads 7,473 Posts
all of the above...laugh in different order...
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Jun 24, 2010 4:38 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Joseph_Mack
Joseph_MackJoseph_MackDenver, Colorado USA16 Threads 4 Polls 177 Posts
Conrad73: ................and asks himself,why did that have to be a Poll?


It doesn't have to be a poll, but it is what it is right.

Later.
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Jun 24, 2010 4:41 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Costapacket
CostapacketCostapacketparis, Centre-Val de Loire France2 Threads 2,182 Posts
Joseph_Mack: It doesn't have to be a poll, but it is what it is right.

Later.


Then Costapacket walks in and says "what a poll"?
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Jun 24, 2010 4:45 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
cherrybrandy
cherrybrandycherrybrandycambridge, Cambridgeshire, England UK24 Threads 7,473 Posts
Costapacket: Then Costapacket walks in and says "what a poll"?
killjoy...laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 4:49 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Boban1
Boban1Boban1bigplace, Central Serbia Serbia144 Threads 5 Polls 18,789 Posts
and what the hell happened with tracy????....uh oh
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Jun 24, 2010 4:49 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Costapacket
CostapacketCostapacketparis, Centre-Val de Loire France2 Threads 2,182 Posts
cherrybrandy: killjoy...


Costapacket googled poll and got zip so he carried on with the story.

A smart young nymph named cherry explained the meaning and carried him to the bedroom........... laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 4:50 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Costapacket
CostapacketCostapacketparis, Centre-Val de Loire France2 Threads 2,182 Posts
Boban1: and what the hell happened with tracy????....


Tracy had bow legs and had to be writen out of the story.....laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 4:57 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
rytcharlie
rytcharlierytcharlieprovincia di Lodi, Lombardy Italy34 Threads 2 Polls 1,412 Posts
not a bad piece ... can I give you a little feedback?

Just my opinions ..

- what are daily emails? - it might be better to say something like 'that day's emails'

- 'automatically' is possibly not the best word here - to instantly catch the eye could be more natural.

- instead of identified herself as Mary - might it be better to say that the email had simply been signed 'Mary' ?

- get a hold of his holdings sounds clumsy to me.

- I'm not sure we uaually speak of things being inside an email - why don't you say that the email mentioned or contained a phone number and an address, and had a ticket attached to it?

hope my feedback helps ..

Charlie conversing
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Jun 24, 2010 5:00 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Fraya
FrayaFrayaCork, Ireland1 Threads 3,762 Posts
Joseph got annoyed cos nobody played by his rules and went off to find folks he could control laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 5:01 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
cherrybrandy
cherrybrandycherrybrandycambridge, Cambridgeshire, England UK24 Threads 7,473 Posts
Costapacket: Costapacket googled poll and got zip so he carried on with the story.

A smart young nymph named cherry explained the meaning and carried him to the bedroom...........
rolling on the floor laughing thats some good imagination...rolling on the floor laughing what happened to the poor,delusional girl after that?confused
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Jun 24, 2010 5:06 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Boban1
Boban1Boban1bigplace, Central Serbia Serbia144 Threads 5 Polls 18,789 Posts
Fraya: Joseph got annoyed cos nobody played by his rules and went off to find folks he could control


life is a game ...


down with the rules and boundaries


(no... Im not talking about anarchy ).....grin
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Jun 24, 2010 5:13 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Fraya
FrayaFrayaCork, Ireland1 Threads 3,762 Posts
Boban1: life is a game ... down with the rules and boundaries (no... Im not talking about anarchy ).....


Everyone comes to the table with their own agenda.....I mean rules.....aaah I mean agenda laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 5:23 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Costapacket
CostapacketCostapacketparis, Centre-Val de Loire France2 Threads 2,182 Posts
cherrybrandy: thats some good imagination... what happened to the poor,delusional girl after that?


The poor delusional Cherry broke both her legs carrying Costa up the stairs, Costa with a heart of gold gave her what she yearned for there on the stairs. After they had finished their sweaty tanglement Costa send her crawlling down to the fridge for a beer...laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 5:35 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Boban1: and what the hell happened with tracy????....
Tracy went on to several more Appointments.......laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 5:37 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Fraya
FrayaFrayaCork, Ireland1 Threads 3,762 Posts
Tracy`s over-worked
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Jun 24, 2010 5:46 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Fraya
FrayaFrayaCork, Ireland1 Threads 3,762 Posts
or buy in for a percentage doh oooops
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Jun 24, 2010 5:48 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Boban1
Boban1Boban1bigplace, Central Serbia Serbia144 Threads 5 Polls 18,789 Posts
Fraya: or buy in for a percentage oooops


yeah.... a pice of the action giggle
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Jun 24, 2010 7:39 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Joseph_Mack
Joseph_MackJoseph_MackDenver, Colorado USA16 Threads 4 Polls 177 Posts
rytcharlie: not a bad piece ... can I give you a little feedback?

Just my opinions ..

- what are daily emails? - it might be better to say something like 'that day's emails'

- 'automatically' is possibly not the best word here - to instantly catch the eye could be more natural.

- instead of identified herself as Mary - might it be better to say that the email had simply been signed 'Mary' ?

- get a hold of his holdings sounds clumsy to me.

- I'm not sure we uaually speak of things being inside an email - why don't you say that the email mentioned or contained a phone number and an address, and had a ticket attached to it?

hope my feedback helps ..

Charlie


All good feed back. I will do better. Thank you.
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Jun 24, 2010 7:42 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Joseph_Mack
Joseph_MackJoseph_MackDenver, Colorado USA16 Threads 4 Polls 177 Posts
Fraya: Joseph got annoyed cos nobody played by his rules and went off to find folks he could control


Hardy har har. It is to laugh. And I don't have control issues, wellllll, not much anyways. laugh

Now Fraya, just call me master and we will get along just fine ok.
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Jun 24, 2010 7:43 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Joseph_Mack
Joseph_MackJoseph_MackDenver, Colorado USA16 Threads 4 Polls 177 Posts
cherrybrandy: all of the above... in different order...


Yeah, make this harder then it has to be. roll eyes
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Jun 24, 2010 7:45 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Joseph_Mack
Joseph_MackJoseph_MackDenver, Colorado USA16 Threads 4 Polls 177 Posts
Costapacket: Then Costapacket walks in and says "what a poll"?


The what walks in and says? Speak English will you. I don't speak gibberish to well. laugh
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Jun 24, 2010 7:49 PM CST Interactive story: Part One.
Joseph_Mack
Joseph_MackJoseph_MackDenver, Colorado USA16 Threads 4 Polls 177 Posts
Boban1: and what the hell happened with tracy????....


What happen? She isn't in the story yet, but later maybe when we have a romantic scene, to put it nicely. Speak of romantic scenes, I'm casting right now. Cherry, you want to try out for the part? (:
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Jun 25, 2010 2:36 AM CST Interactive story: Part One.
cherrybrandy
cherrybrandycherrybrandycambridge, Cambridgeshire, England UK24 Threads 7,473 Posts
Joseph_Mack: What happen? She isn't in the story yet, but later maybe when we have a romantic scene, to put it nicely. Speak of romantic scenes, I'm casting right now. Cherry, you want to try out for the part? (:
laugh laugh if its the ho'e part,im hopeless...
the poor nymph,carring Costa around-no chance in hell....rolling on the floor laughing
i can try some sofisticated,tragic female character...mysterious and slightly dangerous....laugh laugh
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