wayne34 Most Commented Poems

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crisp sandwich I make my favorite snack I butter two slices of white bread Adding some cheese spread for more taste I layer my bread with My well planned...	984	12	0	Mar 2013	Mar 2013	2 hrs ago
13 I dread no 13 don't like this date at all Sweeting palms my heart beats so loud Dizzzzzzzzy feeling in my head I would rather stay in bed T...	538	11	0	Apr 2013	Apr 2013	Apr 8
high noon The noon train blows its whistle Arriving the well known jesse james The two colt gun slinger With his colt 45 s He heads to odettes saloon...	829	10	0	Apr 2013	May 2013	Apr 17
stars (14 word challenge) stars bright Twinkle In the nite Distant They shine bright in the nite sky...	473	10	0	Nov 2013	Nov 2013	Apr 13
the things i would take challenge Onto my island in the sun Three thing I will take Take my saw and make me tables and chairs I will sit and ponder As the world goes bye Wi...	476	9	0	Sep 2013	Sep 2013	Apr 15
xmas cheer Xmas Turkey Roast...	637	8	0	Dec 2014	Dec 2014	Apr 11
five p out rage In dire straits The poor man be For he wanted a p To the unknown A toilet he wanted to find High and low He looked with strained look He c...	499	7	0	Aug 2014	Sep 2014	Apr 17
echo locate Blind too the world The high pitched sound Echo locate These creature of the night Flying solo they locate their prey Big ears they have For...	529	7	0	Jan 2014	Jan 2014	Apr 11

frozen falls Ice chills Its cold breath Blows its cold chill Freezes The cascading water Stands motionless Stop in its tracks Motion lost Ripples o...	421	7	0	Jan 2014	Jan 2014	Apr 11
The Model Draped in her bed sheet The model stands her modesty hidden From prying eyes Draping her body her Elegant curves Hidden but reavelling...	519	7	0	Jan 2014	Jan 2014	Apr 11
parrot Wish I had a parrot I would call him after me Sit him on the pearch And let him talk to me Who's a pretty boy he would learn Maybe a few mo...	570	7	0	Feb 2014	Feb 2014	Apr 17
dance with me In my arms I hold you tight Your arms carress my waist You r head rest on my shoulder you nibble my ear Sudducing me As we slowly dance S...	505	7	0	Feb 2014	Mar 2014	Apr 7
seed Into the pot of earth I sow the seeds of life I cover these seeds tenderly cover with more earth I water generously My seeds sown I wait I...	744	7	0	Mar 2014	Mar 2014	Mar 22
never die Do I want to live for ever Never to grow old To stay young and slim Never to be old Days will be endless What would I do Get married as you...	462	7	0	Mar 2014	Mar 2014	24 hrs ago
the easter bunny The chocolate bunnies Comming The men and woman and children are going to get fat All the chocolate bunnies and eggs that they will consume...	535	7	0	Mar 2013	Mar 2013	Apr 12
pictures in the sand The things we constantly think about are past and future...	610	6	0	Oct 2009	Oct 2009	Apr 9
dark lake Cold depths of winter The ripples of the lake The ducks and swans shield themselfs They hide from the blowing wind That belows the lake Cold...	501	6	0	Mar 2014	Mar 2014	Apr 16
we got you a card The tables set The Sunday roast is cooked The veg is on The gravy made The cards on the table It read to you mother dearest Join us for d...	434	6	0	Mar 2014	Apr 2014	8 hrs ago
the 10 word challenge All words have to be used only once any style poem my friends good writing...	686	6	0	Mar 2014	Apr 2014	7 hrs ago
warmth of the sun On the fields of green The flowers bloom The blue sky Shine its rays of sun Envelopes the body and sole Warming the inner core Its radian...	449	6	0	Jan 2014	Jan 2014	Mar 22
The End Hi save my last word The end I see I wave goodbye Lost am I Drained of thought Pondering what to write Lost poems of thought My creati...	420	6	0	Jan 2014	Jan 2014	11 hrs ago

smile :-) and the world smiles with you Frown and they will pass you by Say hallo and a hi and smile goes a long way Be miserable they don't want to kno...	705	6	0	Nov 2013	Nov 2013	Apr 13
belly dance challenge brunette hair intoxicates Sexy eyes she dances for him her gourges curves dance She girates her heavenly curves Intoxicating her heavenly...	519	6	0	Aug 2014	Aug 2014	Apr 16
To shine and polish On the mantle place With pride of place You polish and clean You wind up Your daily routine You make sure You clean it so well Shines a...	410	6	0	Sep 2014	Sep 2014	Apr 10
six sides Six sides No way in side To make hole to find are way in What's inside Fresh air paper thin Air enclosed What's inside no openings no door...	597	5	0	Sep 2014	Sep 2014	Apr 17
debt The fear that debt could cause on your life...	397	5	0	May 2014	May 2014	Apr 3
statue ( 40 word challenge) On the plinth the object of beauty Cold to touch marbled in stone Elegant captavating figure Fine detail Long legs Tall and eligant This l...	446	5	0	Nov 2013	Nov 2013	18 hrs ago
shadow man In the shadows The dark pavement The quiet unlite Dark lane The alley ways He waits Hidden from preying eyes He scurries about No form...	484	5	0	Oct 2013	Oct 2013	Apr 17
Angel In her arms She holds me tight Her flowing white robes Hides her glowing wings Her halo high above her brow Tall and elegant Is she Fo...	396	5	0	Jan 2014	Jan 2014	Mar 31
roar Four legs Eyes black with orange circle Long whiskers Teeth sharp Silent tails swirls back and forth Nose to the ground The everlasting sce...	643	5	0	Feb 2014	Feb 2014	Apr 12
time continued Endless years Measurred in time Seconds minutes Hours Milliseconds Endless time Never ending Never gaining Constant time Years go by...	424	5	0	Jan 2014	Jan 2014	Apr 11

Finger on the trigger Two countries at war A mine field of bombs Who will be the first to trigger the bomb Nuclear goes globel Radiation spread The atomic radiati...	388	5	0	Feb 2014	Feb 2014	Apr 17
wine and dine The table set Silk white linen Drapped Silver cutlery The candles lite Flowers drapped A dinner for two Champagine flows Bubbles ri...	694	5	0	Feb 2014	Feb 2014	Apr 3
valentine rose The valentine rose Waits on the window A fair maiden It does seek All a lone it does stand Watching and waiting For the fair maidens hand...	341	5	0	Feb 2014	Feb 2014	11 hrs ago
snow snow snow snow from above covering the land with snow,frosty winds...	698	5	0	Dec 2010	Dec 2010	Apr 8
Appollo On the launch pad she stands Glintinting her white curvy figure Her pointed nose pointing up to the sky Her nose cone her heat shield Gracefull...	556	5	0	Apr 2013	Apr 2013	Apr 6
halloween On the bridge the headless Horseman sits Comtemplating his future Doing his job to scare human beings His day began as normal To scare the to...	423	5	0	Oct 2013	Oct 2013	Apr 17
hidden When times are bad Wish I could dissapear Vanish into thin air Put on my invisable cream Spread it all over and watch me dissapear Into the...	454	5	0	Sep 2013	Sep 2013	Apr 14
sunflower They come in All shapes and sizes A rose bud A bulb of life In its own cacoon hidden Waiting to be born In its deapths holding its new bo...	499	4	0	Sep 2013	Sep 2013	Apr 7
ice hotel The snow falls Coldness lingers the ice freezes Solid foundations Opoun which to build They form the walls ,the front door and sides Big bloc...	373	4	0	Sep 2013	Sep 2013	Apr 7

wayne34 Most Commented Poems (352)