free like the birds

what would you do?
if I did something like this to you
in all honesty
would you still be as friendly?

we always judge others
but never look at ourselves
nobody bothers
put all our mistakes on the shelves

when will we take the time
to take action for our words
nevers yours, always mine
feel like we should fly away and be free like the birds

we always think that things are better elsewhere
but its not true, it's all the same no matter where
we are just too blind, not wanting to see or hear
all we do is hide behind our fear

Its a shame to see what we've become
there is no more unity...we are no longer one
maybe it'll be better tomorrow
when we get rid of all this sorrow

when will we take the time
to take action for our words
nevers yours, always mine
feel like we should fly away and be free like the birds

how would you feel, if I did this to you
tell me honestly, I bet you'd find it hard to get through
the days without wondering
and asking questions about everything

I bet you'd feel broken and unloved
I bet you'd feel that you were used and the defeat
of the one who you thought loved
but played around on you
and not being very discreet
I bet all the hapiness would leave you too

when will we take the time
to take action for our words
nevers yours, always mine
feel like we should fly away and be free like the birds
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Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
ok guys
don't laugh... I don't do this often... Theres a person that keeps asking me to write stuff that he can put to music.
I didn't show it to him yet
I'd like some feedback if its possible
be really honest ok loll
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The words that are trapped inside me

My body is strikened and chilled to the bone
As I lie here alone, waiting for you to come home

I wish I can touch you
feel your heat
your warm embrace
you lips, I can still taste

We are apart
because its just the start
theres no need to rush
into all that relationship stuff.

but my body aches for you
my mind wonders about you
wishing that time can go by
what else can i do
I must stand by

If I can say
all that I wanted,
without making you go away
I think it would be ok

but for now I must be
waiting for the right time to say
the words that are trapped inside me
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Posted: Feb 2010
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Vampire

Stuck in quick sand and sinking fast.
Being dragged down into the depths of evil.
Feel their slimy hands grip to my skin
The devil whispers in my ear, while his disciples laugh in my face.

There’s no way of escaping
There are too many of them
As I hold on for dear life
I feel that the battle will be short lived.

My body is weakening
I slip in and out of consciousness
I pray for god, but I fear that it's already too late
My blood is being extracted from my veins
Slides down my body, while they feed upon of me.

No turning back now
I've been bitten,
Mutilated and damaged, but not killed.
In minutes, I feel the transformation begin.
My insides burn like fire.
Excruciating pain rips through my body
Like a train through the night air.

Everything becomes cold
The life that I've known is slowly slipping through my fingers.
I will soon become a child of the night,
Hunting innocent pray to feed my desire for eternity.
The taste of food slowly disappears from my memory to be replaced with the urge for blood.

The lights go out
When I come to
The world is different
It takes some time for my eyes to readjust
They are moving so fast around me, but it seems like things are at a stand still.

I realize at that moment that time doesn't matter anymore, because it no longer exists for me
The angels will not hear me anymore
For I have become
A Vampire
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
this is not a poem but I've been writing stuff like this all summer
I have about 20 pages of stuff like this...
I'd like to publish it
so, your comments will be a welcome
:-)
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