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one_music_man
one_music_man
Sullivan, Missouri USA

What do you think of my profile? should there be changes?

What if anything would you like to know about me?
Do I sound intriguing or interesting?
Do I sound arrogant?
What if anything would you change about me or my interests?
Are my pictures ok or need improvement?
What about me is appealing to you or not appealing?
Do you wish me and my kind were not on this dating site?

Please feel free to answer some or all of the above questions in detail if you like, and thanks for your help!
Rog
May 8, 2013 6:58 PM CST
Profile Reviews & Comments for one_music_man
niah9
niah9
Auckland, New Zealand
1,273 comments
My first though reading through boxed text, was you probably have children older than 18, and that is how most females would I believe view the ages you give.
Next, dare I say you are trying to sell yourself too hard, and it becomes almost a ramble, that shouldn't be necessary. That can be covered when you have become a favourite.
28 hits and one favourite, is good.
The brief mention of what you look for in a lady, is different to the text boxes. Your written text, mentions blonde slim to medium.....not a total variety.
Photo's, are great for secondary, but a facial cropped with a
smile, for primary always works best. Impact ...'online now.'
Niah
May 8, 2013 11:14 PM CST
one_music_man
one_music_man
Sullivan, Missouri USA
2 comments
niah9: My first though reading through boxed text, was you probably have children older than 18, and that is how most females would I believe view the ages you give.
Next, dare I say you are trying to sell yourself too hard, and it becomes almost a ramble, that shouldn't be necessary. That can be covered when you have become a favourite.
28 hits and one favourite, is good.
The brief mention of what you look for in a lady, is different to the text boxes. Your written text, mentions blonde slim to medium.....not a total variety.
Photo's, are great for secondary, but a facial cropped with a
smile, for primary always works best. Impact ...'online now.'
Niah


What can I say? Other than the fact that you are rite? Thank you for pointing those things out. I will correct them immediately.
applause
May 8, 2013 11:53 PM CST
lucy1777
lucy1777
Broken Arrow Oklahoma, Oklahoma USA
2 comments
I like your profilegrin
May 9, 2013 9:20 PM CST
one_music_man
one_music_man
Sullivan, Missouri USA
2 comments
lucy1777: I like your profile


Thank you very much! I certainly apreciate the help.
May 9, 2013 11:51 PM CST

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