Two things I noticed instantly was the bad spelling, though I admit much is a cross over from text messaging and pronunciation. The second being it is a one sided profile, meaning expressing what you want and expect of a woman, which I believe ladies will give a wide berth.
All relationships have give and take, and now most believe a partnership of equals.
So my advice is to read through the written text and do a spell check as you edit. Next consider what you are giving to a lady, to make her interested in a long-term relationship, adding what you will give and share with her....
The photos included are all very similar, so variety, meaning different locations and different style of dress important...and smile....it makes a huge difference.
Niah