To much writing and information.

I thought it's very well written but didn't like “That's there's excitement of seeing them again”...
'That there's the excitement of seeing them again' or 'that it’s exciting to see them again" I think works better.

Great photo for starters - you have a natural and Earthy beauty. That coupled with your writing, you come across as a very genuine and open woman.

I'm in two minds about the negativity, though. On the one hand it shows who you are, on the other hand I wonder if it's pointless. Not so much the BS comment, but the "I don't want to be someone's option" bit.

The men who will treat you like an option perhaps won't care how you want to be treated and the men who will treat you as you wish to be won't need to be told you don't want to be an option. I'm wondering if that much honesty makes you a little emotionally vulnerable too early.

You could make your writing more succinct to appeal to men who'd like something snappier, but maybe they're not the men for you. Maybe you need to just be who you are.

Overall, it appealed to me and generally I favour witty profiles. You must be doing something right.

Hi there gorgeous, the fact that you are here looking for love is great, and you will find exactly what you are looking for. But if you changed your profile picture and name, I see better things happening for you. According to your profile picture, you come across to me as someone who is unsure of what to expect life and this is also confirmed on your profile name "wait and see". Change these two aspects into a more joyous loving outlook and you will be amazed at the outcome.

I like your profile. I especially like your photo and the fact that you're not a painted parrot. Any man who is serious will read the text and know where you're coming from. I would have liked to read a little bit about what you like to do to give another person an "in", so to speak, but that's clearly up to you :-) Good luck!