Is Description to long confusing

Is the Description to long/confusing?

Hey,

I am completely new to the world of "online dating", it is actually fun had a few good talks with people that have a great sense of humor.

At one point we were always coming to what I aim for. I put it good together where i stand in my life and what I aim for by filling the profile, would be nice to hear what you see by the information on it.

I mean I am not a heartless german machine or selfish, but I know what I want and what I can offer right now and if someone is a soulmate, or a great passionate lover this is something you find out with time. I am 30 years old had relations good and bad and I am not up to rush into something, as I actually enjoy my life, its style and the potential it offers if kept on track, but sure comfort and romance are the sugar coating its life, if uncomplicated / drama free its the Jackpot in life.

So well well looking forward to get some feedback do not hesitate to say what you feel/think I see every feedback as potential to grow.

MaltaMike

Smile it always pays out - oh and yes i talk with everyone, does not mean i aim for more than this

I am a:: 38 yr-old man
Seeking:: seeking woman, 28-36
Location:: St. Pauls Bay, Majjistral, Malta, Western Europe
Last Online:: Online over 1 month
Height:: 6' 4" (193 cm)
Body Type:: Toned & Firm
Hair Color:: Light Brown
Eye Color:: Blue
Ethnicity:: White/Caucasian
German / Bavarian
Education:: Some College
Oh Lord what I originally learned I did not do for the last 8 years, there for it is not of importance.
Religion:: Christian/Catholic
I believe in god, I believe in faith and I believe in free will, there for I do not judge, I do not hate, try to forgive, try to be good, BUT I am not catholic I am follower of the positive cristianity which means if in danger i respond as necessary
Occupation:: Finance
Senior at a Payment Gateway Company
Income:: $25,000 to $50,000
Smokes:: Regularly
Drinks:: Occasionally
Marital Status:: Never Married
Has Kids:: No
Wants Kids:: Not Sure
Looking for:: Short-term Dating
Sign:: Gemini

My Match Details

Seeking:: seeking woman, 28-36
Located:: Anywhere
Height:: Any
Body Type:: Fit/Athletic, Toned & Firm, Average, Proportional
Hair:: Any
Eyes:: Any
Ethnicity:: Any
Education:: Any
Religion:: Any
Occupation:: Any
Income:: Any
Smokes:: Any
Drinks:: Rarely, Occasionally, Socially
Marital Status:: Any
Has kids:: No
Wants kids:: Someday | Not Sure

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Ilza26
santo domingo, Distrito Nacional Dominican Republic
4 comments

Hi! I only have a few weeks on this site but when I visit a profil and tje description is too long, I get tired and dont read it completely. So I think you should make it shorter.
Hugs
Edwilza

Aug 4, 2015 4:34 PM CST

MaltaMike
St. Pauls Bay, Majjistral Malta
2 comments

I am in my first week and I really have a great exchange. Usually I prefer things in real life as I am an extroverted person. I appreciate the feedback thank you Edwilza, hope to get more but I dont think I will lower the amount of text as writing/text/values is my life. The question I asked was for hearing what people understand and if i could say it shorter, not to change myself, but again thank you very much for it.

Aug 4, 2015 5:10 PM CST

ali74nader
b, Iraq

Hi,
My name is Ali
Can you see my file?
Want dating
I loved this Angel

Jul 1, 2016 8:08 PM CST

Jimmy5IA
Warrington, Cheshire, England UK
26 comments

I fell asleep after reading the first line and woke up two years later.

Jul 4, 2016 5:01 AM CST

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