Hi, just interested to find out what people think of my profile. Have I said to much or to little.

I've tried to express in such a way that it gives people a idea, at least, of whether they want to know me better as well as stating what I am really looking for. Do people really want to know all this or have I said to much? Any hints for improving the profile will be appreciated. I may or may not change it accordingly depending on what the suggestions are. Thanks for taking to time to check it out. :)