Well, other than the usual truckload of typos everyone seems to insist on having in their profile -- I LOVE it!! It's quirky, creative and intelligent, just like you.

Could you use an editor? Sure! But this is such a great read who cares about the length? You've painted an engaging and endearing picture of yourself. It has the kind of insightful depth that goes way beyond the usual "I want someone to love me for me" cliche, found in most of what I read around here. It also doesn't hurt that you're hilarious, just a tad goofy, and really cute. (then again I'm prejudiced because I'm ga-ga for red heads and art lovers.) Nevertheless, this is the kind of profile that makes a person look good on the INSIDE. After reading it, I totally want to make-out with you. And I bet I'm not alone.

Bottomline: fix the grammatical stuff and don't change a thing! Especially you.

Good luck out there. (as if you'll need it)

I would say sometimes we tend to try and give to much information in our profiles, maybe just keeping it simple and honest, you can always let people know more about yourself if they contact you . Basic a few photos and hopefully some contacts come.

Alright, so my proofreading of my own review was lacking in that I spelled important wrong above, sorry about that!