Your pics are great!
Your very honest about what your looking for
I don't think you need to change a thing!

Your pictures are superb, your text is OK. But, if I thought of contacting someone I should have an idea what to talk about with him at first. Give to a possible girl/woman some hints about what is your mind picture like. What do you think about. In the internet communication, although the way we look makes the great part of it, we communicate with words first. And if you start your message with: hi, how are you, or the same old pattern like: I've seen your profile and I'd like to know more about you... blah...blah.. is not very attractive. What I want to say, introduce some kind of a thought path depicting your innerself in your profile text. I hope this helps, good luck.

Thanks to both of you who took the time and gave me some input. I will try to improve my text and give it a little more personal touch.