I think the other two ladies covered the main points, but I did notice you repeat a few times, that could reduce the text and allow it to flow.
But patience is the main factor....Niah

Thank you for your feedback ladies. I have taken new pictures, but not sure if I like them better or not? I will post some new ones soon. Thank you again. Take care.

hmm ... i like your foto..

Old??? You're not old!

To some younger ones, you (and I) are old. I like your profile. It's just that you have to be careful. And people are vain sometimes. They don't look past the outward to get to know the inward. :-) Til then, smile and enjoy!

Hey Man,

I think your profile is good. You say a lot about yourself and seem like a good guy. Only slight thing I'd say in terms of the text is maybe you should reduce the age range you are looking for? A 24 year old might look at your profile and think you are too old (as has been said before.) A 45 year old might think you are really after a younger woman. If you even changed it to 35-45, it still gives you a good range and doesn't isolate any part of that age cohort.

I'm getting crucified for my photo so not going to say much on the pic, other than maybe wear a longer teeshirt, some women may not like the look and also your tatoos are visible. A woman who doesn't like tatoos sees them straight away and it may put her off. Generally in any event, unless you've got a model/bodybuilder's physique, sleeveless tops on a man are probably not a good idea.

Keep it going though. Best of luck.