I found your profile very intimidating maybe a few less words and a little more empathy my friend.

Maybe the right woman had not yet read your profile sweetie. Just a thought.

I'm not one to mix words, so hold on to your hat kid. Your looking for your twin. You sound like a school kid with that, I want, I need, She should, we must. Stop stating so much of what you think you know. Let a women be a woman without your preconceived notions of one. You will be pleasantly surprised at how a woman can stimulate your overall view of what love really is, and feels like. You don't even mention what you like to do. Dance, fishing, romantic dinners, long walks together, ect, ect. You have a lot to say in your profile, but don't really say a thing. You are a very attractive man, with a nice body. Your poetic and sound, but you need to loosen up a little. Shorten your profile chatter a bit,(a lot) and you will see there is a woman out there for you I'm sure of it. Good luck kid. Fancee

Ide say take a bit of advice from these intellectual women from above if you're truly trying to find someone. If not, your effort will give you your results.

To long profile ....

Hi, I'm sorry but I found it overwhelming and with a controlling overtone - "you will feel this, you will do this and you will give me this" It would have me running for the exit.

You are obviously an articulate and sensitive man, but it's rather heavy as an outline of your personality and tells nothing of your interests so that you can hopefully find something in common that you enjoy.

Please take this as it is meant, to help improve the level of responses you receive. I'm sure if you change it somewhat to come across in a warmer, interesting manner you will be more successful.

Get rid of the child's photo please. He is not looking for a partner, nor consented to have his pic on an adult dating site.

Apart from that, you sound like an intelligent, thoughtful man, but your profile looks like you are commissioning the building of a woman in a factory.

Women are real people. They live, love, make mistakes, forgive mistakes, etc., etc.
Just state the basic requirements, tell more about the real everyday You, the nman who goes bowling, reads books etc.

Make yourself sound like a real man looking for a real woman.

Best of luck

take the pics of ur kids off

You are right Sarah,, I've been inadvertently reading your posts and you give genuine advice,,, good girl

You are right Sarah,, I've been inadvertently reading your posts and you give genuine advice,,, good girl

You got some good feedback already.

Main thing is to take pics with children off, they didn't consent to be shown on here.

Put up few formal pictures of yourself..and see the replies..

I want to thank everyone for their comments. I appreciate them all :)

I loved your profile! It was perfect; for me that is. It stirred many feelings and images in my mind.