Dude! You come across as dull as ditchwater with "but most of the time I just hang out at home and watch a movie or tv."
Be creative and stretch out what you do. Christ! Say you like going for walks, reading or something. Anything has to be better than coming across as someone sitting in front of the TV most nights.
Write something about yourself and how you see yourself as a prospective partner, and elaborate more on what you're looking for.
What you wrote about yourself, really needs to be expanded on. The only things that are written that aren't already included, is you liking of sea music and movies. Good photos though. Go crazy and write about what you are like as a person and what you do for fun.
Thank you. I did it because it was mentioned in a thread that he should adjust it a bit, and he jiggled it about, but just made it worse. I didn't know he had a review up at the time, because I only look in here when I'm bored.
You wasn't supposed to just copy and paste what I wrote, but use it as a guideline. A gentle thanks would have been nice, seeing as I'd done you a big favour, BTW. Manners don't cost anything, and will get you further than you're likely to get.
The 'what I am looking for' bit should be where you have written this: "What I am looking for is some one who is fun kind happy some one that likes the same as me some one between the age of 30 to 50
You've spent more effort on this review than you did on your profile. Why would anyone want to write to you? It doesn't come across that you're able to have anything to say.
So far, all your profile reads, is that you're looking for a girlfriend who can make you laugh.
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RE: I'm new to this.
Dude! You come across as dull as ditchwater with "but most of the time I just hang out at home and watch a movie or tv."Be creative and stretch out what you do. Christ! Say you like going for walks, reading or something. Anything has to be better than coming across as someone sitting in front of the TV most nights.
Write something about yourself and how you see yourself as a prospective partner, and elaborate more on what you're looking for.