I reckon maybe knock the first bit out. I'm a bloke not looking at other blokes so maybe I'm no expert. But I'm sure the rest is fine and you'll go OK with it.
Too funny. Business in England... So what, you live in Pakistan to be closer to the soccer ball factory? ...Geez only the really dim ones would consider that, and they have no money Sanjeev...
I think from reading it, "very outspoken" is something maybe to have a look at. I think "Enjoys a robust conversation" or "Not afraid to voice my opinion on current events" something like that might be nicer. Nice smile, everything else looks just fine.
Generally, when I see "whats inside that counts" or anything similar to this, its a person that I wouldnt be attracted to for whatever reason. Though I suspect this is not what you wanted to hear.
Its a good profile. The thing is, living with somebody in a foreign country is a big step, usually. Maybe living together should be an issue after you met somebody nice.
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RE: Help! I'm clueless on dating profiles
Whats the difference between Arkansas and Arkansaw? Is it something to do with Alice in Wonderland?