Nice open pictures - the big smile one is a winner. The write up doesn't really say what your interests are though but does tell something of your characteristics. I did find the celibacy vs. abstinence thing a bit confusing as they are essentially the same, no? Maybe just a matter of semantics.
Your photo is open and friendly but if you wish for a serious relationship with someone, you really must try and write like an adult and distance yourself from teenage-like slangy lingo. You are 28. Make your writing reflect that in your heading.
Your profile lacks punch. All the pictures look the same and the write up repeats some of the physical attributes that are already stated in your 'fill-in-the-blanks' profile bit.
You need some sort of an attention grabber or to add something exciting that has oomph!
You probably get a lot of mail from people who are in other parts of the world because there is likely not a large group of men from Fiji on Connecting Singles. Also you're pretty and your write-up makes you sound like a nice person, so men will write from everywhere.
Perhaps you can try local dating websites or places that you can meet and mingle with other on your gorgeous island, closer to home.
There's only one photo. It looks friendly and welcoming. If possible, try and post more of yourself doing things that you like to do. That could help. And variety!
The pictures are nice with a great smile! But you do really need to adjust them to the correct rotation as it is awkward to look at them. Another small detail. Your write up says that you like your friends and girls. Does that mean you have daughters that you like or that you like girls who are not yet women, or girls in general. It's a bit misleading and confusing.
Pictures are very cool and handsome but your write-up sounds like you are babbling on with little thought. Perhaps if you took the time to decide what to write about yourself in an eloquent and succinct way, it would be better. All the best.
Nicholas. You have written quite a lot of yourself which is good but it comes across as too serious, too formal and too contrived. It seems to be lacking in spontaneity and humour. Have a friend tell you what your good qualities are, why you are fun to be around and post that in your profile. The photo is gorgeous but again way too serious and formal, maybe more of a variety of you smiling and doing some of your hobbies that make you happy. Best of luck .
Your profile comes across as very sweet. Not your typical profile but very sweet nonetheless. Just remember to treat the lady that you end up with very well after you meet her Insha' Allah. Much success and the best of luck to you.
I like your profile and yes, maybe some men may be intimidated, but I think that the sort of man you would be attracted to - intellectual would probably not so your confidence should not be a deterrent.
Two comments: Some countries don't recognise 'separated'. Where I live doesn't and it is a problem when I need to fill out forms: married, single, divorced or widowed. I think this may be why some men may get confused. I have been legally separated for 8 years but it's easier at times to just say divorced. I do that here.
Maybe you can try and get a tech friend to help you properly orient your second photo. It's a shame to have a pretty picture be not well seen
I read every single word of your profile, but I am a woman. Please prune it a little. You sound like an awesome person and you are a very attractive woman, but the text is too long. Good luck lovely lady. May you find what you wish for.
Your profile picture is pretty and you have written in a forthright way. In terms of a review, I would suggest that you add pictures that show you doing the things that you enjoy, perhaps a full length also of yourself. I would go with a bit more modesty in describing what you see as positive qualities and perhaps use a spell-check to get rid of some of the spelling and grammar mistakes which lower the quality of your profile. All the best.
There is nothing to review. You have no photographs and 23 words describing yourself. Try and put more about yourself so that people can see something of you and your personality.
I think your profile may be a lot more effective if you would put more about yourself and what you do for fun, what you enjoy, what you dislike etc., instead of quoting song lyrics. This way the girl can learn more about who you are instead of reading Robin Thicke lyrics (as nice as it may be)
Got it...silly me, did not see the dates. Best to you with meeting a whole world wide of cool and interesting penpals and people to chat with within your preferences,
Is the shorter cropped haired-look a more current or more 'in the past look'. Which is a recent? Folks like to know that when viewing profiles I think. It gives a very different view of you I think.
And I note that you are looking for penpals but perhaps only within a restricted area/age range/other specifics?
A bit of a long read (for those for whom English may not be a first language) but otherwise does state who you are and what you would like. I personally like the long reads.
The photos are nice....I think there could be a bit more variety though. They seemed too much of the same to me..
Be patient with finding the women. Perhaps get involved in the chats that may be happening in your area. It's not your age, there are many many women in your preferred range who are out there.
It's not the imagery, it's the song, or perhaps the idea behind the song....just happens to be my favourite video of the song and I could see you as the Partisan fighter fighting the good fight regardless of the price (I have too vivid an imagination :))
RE: Im wat ur lookin for
The smile in picture 2 (with the phone) is really really cute. Get a full face shot of you smiling. The ladies 'll like that.Good luck