The profile in itself looks pretty good but I think that you could say it in a whole lot fewer words. Just a suggestion to condense it as some men may not be willing to take the time to read through all of it. The best of luck to you!!!
Hi Joe. You look & sound like a nice guy but as I've suggested to so many, check the spelling, grammer, puncuation, capitalization & spacing in your descriptions! It shouldn't take much time but proofread it please, you'll probably find yourself getting a lot more e-mail. The one pic you've got posted is a good, clear close-up but maybe add one or 2 more? A full body shot would be nice to see. Good luck to you!
I definitely think that your main pic is the best. Also might want to clarify who the kid in the one photo is since you've put that you don't have (nor want) any. The other pics are a little blurry/not the best. How about a full body shot? Also as the last reviewer said, a little more in the descriptions would be nice. Good luck to you lommbo!
Hi Craig, everything looks great to me, I agree with Angelo that another picture or 2 would be nice, especially of a close up. I like that the one you have is on your bike, shows one side of your personality in that it includes something that you obviously enjoy doing. Happy New Year to you and good luck!
Don't take this wrong but for ME, the long, poetic, flowery language is not a turn on. However, for some women it might be, as indicated by the last review for example. Lots of pics are always a plus in my book so you're doing good there. Good luck!
Everything looks good to me. The only thing I might suggest is another pic or 2, especially one w/a close-up of your face. The one that you do have posted is nice as well, it shows you are in really good shape & are obviously interested in fitness etc w/your biking and all ( :
As far as the job thing at least you are being honest and actually HAVE a job. The thing that turns me off right away is someone who writes 2 or 3 paragraphs about themselves & then 1 or 2 sentences about who they'd like in a mate. Clear & concise (short & sweet) about both would be great. Good luck to you!
Your profile looks ok...... Maybe we don't need to see THAT many pics of your pecs & abs. Also, if you're that into fashion & fitness it's hard to believe that you don't care too much about a woman's features (but if you say so........)
Pictures are so important to you? Why do we only get 3 (of the same) face shots here?? Where's one of that, "toned and firm, great body"? And grammatical errors (including misspelled words), I can't STOP counting them (i.e. "bare" in mind) not to mention no apostrophes in the contractions? Sorry but there's hard to find a positive thing to say here and I can only hope that it's a joke (?!)
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The profile in itself looks pretty good but I think that you could say it in a whole lot fewer words. Just a suggestion to condense it as some men may not be willing to take the time to read through all of it. The best of luck to you!!!