You seem a nice guy so to answer your question - yes, I think you need a rewrite here.
A lighthearted approach to this dating thing is good but I think you've gone overboard on the dog joke. Women want to know something about you as a person, other than you like to joke.
Some may find the priest outfit a little tastless too.
This is just my opinion, can't speak for anyone else, but I do wish you the best.
Just a tip..I would change your profile pic to number 3, the one you're smiling in. It's just so much happier and more approachable And that hill is a long ways off yet!!!
Hey Tstone61 seen you round the forums and I thinl maybe part of the problem maybe your pics! I thought from your peofile pic you were much older...they don't do you justice so get someone to take some good clear shots of you looking relaxed an cheerful.
Then start sending out those flowers and best of luck!
Great profile Craig sounds like you're speaking honestly from the heart. Maybe a close-up pic of your face might help? would you return the favour and review mine? Cheers
RE: Keep it, . .or do a re-write?
You seem a nice guy so to answer your question - yes, I think you need a rewrite here.
A lighthearted approach to this dating thing is good but I think you've gone overboard on the dog joke. Women want to know something about you as a person, other than you like to joke.
Some may find the priest outfit a little tastless too.
This is just my opinion, can't speak for anyone else, but I do wish you the best.