well it's great to appear younger, but not when expect to find a lady ...who might be more mature than you. If you are looking for younger ..well girl fine, but I think you need some more serious photos, showing a variety of situation....not just looking like an 18 year old. True the text does explain that you are confident, but maybe a more mature confidence is required. Niah
I think you are sending mixed messages over the email/talk. Maybe if you expand your general text, explaining what else you find attractive, apart from humour....you could look harder at whether dating or email/talk appropriate. Also a few extra photos would be useful... Niah
No, you do not come over as boring, just normal and settled. I do feel the photo would be better cropped for impact, and a real smile, can attract more attention, but as you need more photos anyway, use this as a trial run. If you have pets, maybe include a pic, and outside for variety...full length, and think colour if you can....grey/blue/brown.....can get lost in a page of online now.....smile..... Niah
I think the photos need to reflect the real you, not the persona of an entertainer.....which you revert at times ... The photo that is fuzzy on the end, needs removing, and photos added of normal daily life. In the text, explain hobbies the lady will share with you....because it seems you do not have anything other than work mentioned. You are new, so send out a few flowers to ladies in your area....and it might be wise to lift the age of the lady and also look at tags..... you may find a lady there waiting with the same interests. Also you need a spell check ....Niah
I found the profile has little impact, and the best and quickest way to lift it, in my mind is by adding new photos. Smile, and I think that will help, but you really must add more.... The text is okay, so it has to be photos....and send lots of flowers....and every reply, respond too...... Niah
You don't like talking about yourself...you shock me... I think if anyone makes their way through your long....heading...which could be aiming to impress with English language skill.....sadly does not. It becomes a ramble that most will give up part way through.
Now the real profile: I think you really can edit, as the opinions are yours, and maybe ladies will want to make up their own minds....
Judging all ladies on one 44 year old, seems rather harsh, and proves you have alot to learn. My advice...start again..... but photos aren't too bad...
Viewed 2078 times with only one favourite...isn't good, and I realise there is a language skills problem, but regarding the profile, a spell check will help, as the mistakes run quick and fast.... The more messages, the improvements will come quick and fast, if you try. It may put some ladies off, or it may not, but my advice is to edit your profile carefully...and the opening ...What's wrong,' please.... Niah
Well you are obviously new to CS, so patience is required, but if your focus is Berlin, Germany, then focus on that area, sending flowers to ladies who fit the lady you are looking for. Niah
I think it maybe language skills that led to your minimum comments in text, a simple man looking for a simple lady, does not explain your interests and your hopes. Now you don't have to expand too much, but being in Saudi, means life is difficult for females, so you need to prove you can chat and communicate if you are there, and a lady..... elsewhere.... Niah
Well I think a better profile, but I think you are wrong expecting ladies to msg you. Some might, but most will not. Implying they should, I think will have the opposite effect. Niah
Not bad....but I would add some more photos, especially if they show you in different situations. The punctuation in the lady's part is acceptable, but not the part that tells about you...that really needs to be tidied. Niah
Even writers have to edit, removing words that are duplicated....and you have many, in that very long rambling text. You may have covered all aspects of your needs, but many will not make the end..... What I do believe is lacking, are photos that show, rather than text telling..... Just read your text...and many shorter sentences, can be merged....to reduce....because much is your opinion of you.... Niah
Seriously, you must replace all the photos, because they have the light causing a fuzzing. Another thing is to read your profile text slowly. Some words have no place there....and it will tidy the overall appearance. Apart from that...good luck.
over two thousand hits and not one Favourite..... I wonder what your communication skill lack.... Not one photos is smiling...now that needs to be sorted....
well because of dating, best focus on your area, and send flowers to ladies who may be interested ...as you are with them. I do believe you need to expand the text, so a lady knows what your interests are...and whether they would enjoy meeting you to share time. I also think a few more photos would be useful....
Well you seem to have your ideal sorted, just looking for the lady to 'fit in.' I think you need to expand what you and the lady will share, apart from the motorcycle....because she will have to accept her place in your life..... My advice is to go to tags, and look for motorcycling ladies within the area that suits you, though you may find, they have their own wheels, it is the place to start.....and start sending flowers.... Niah
I think the mention of age, overshadows the whole profile, and adding to the confusion, is no single photo of ...rockstar68... Yes, we can work it out, but why should it be necessary. You have a full profile, detailed about you and what you are looking for. I did wonder whether the statement about age was a hook, to make the review more interesting, but also makes it time consuming. However, looking at the amount of hits you have had, and only one favourite, should concern you far more..... Niah
Not a bad profile, but I wonder if the mention of your new born son, will cause a few problems. I mean he is recent, and it opens questions....that I feel might be wise to discuss with those you are chatting to, rather than general. Niah
Your written text could do with some rewriting, top make it easier to read. It would also be wise to add things you would share with a lady, what you enjoy as a hobby, and maybe if you consider relocation, or if she would have too. Niah
If I am right, and you have been alone 20 years, I have no idea why you state you caught your X in bed with another, unless you still have problems with it....Let it go. Your son stays and looks after everything when you are on the road....so a new lady does not only have to fit in with your mapped out life, but a son as well, to make sure she doesn't upset your lifestyle. Now you may think I am being rough, but I am seeing your profile as many women will read it. I agree with the previous comment, your profile is crude in places, and likely will scare a lady off, if the detailed format of lifestyle she has to accept, hasn't already...Niah
Well you do seem to be honest and straight-forward, but your profile does focus on local, as friends and hang-out is hardly a serious relationship with travel. I don't think you are being too forward, but you may need to expand your area....but send ladies who live local a flower, and see what happens. Niah
I have to agree, the best photo is the final one because you are smiling. I'd drop the rest, and the cap too.....adding new ones that show a variety of scenes. You have to edit your text, as you repeat in one place, and although I understand you are proud of your achievements with your family, I think it will have the wrong effect on those viewing the profile. As for rating you...maybe you shouldn't appear so confident... Niah
Like Beautiful You, I felt you were attracting the wrong type of attention. Maybe you was trying to be clever, and a short section would be fine, not the whole profile text in crytic words. You are attractive, and in my mind, not showing yourself in the best way for a dating site.....you can do better.....
variety would help with the photos. A spell check, and less is sometimes more, when you expanded on your occupation.....you did more harm...in my view. Niah
well take this profile as a stepping stone to a better one. You need to reduce the text...removing that which repeats or says nothing. Spell check...is important. You list your hobbies, but apart from travel, I see little that includes a young lady.....unless moVies...the v was missing.....'Niah
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RE: i need a serious relationship
You certainly need to expand the text, and add more photos.....then you may make some headway....