It's a shame the final photo is so dark...as in my opinion, it is by far the best....and should be the main profile pic. Look at the other photos and ask...are they necessary? Yes, I agree with the spelling, but sometimes less is more, and maybe you have tried too hard, and that males find scary. If so many never commented...maybe they never wanted to hurt your feelings.... Niah
You are a handsome man, and that can sometimes scare a good lady....so I think maybe you have to send a few flowers, and as was pointed out, expand your profile...or add a few more photos. I do find the phone number....I believe that is what you added, is something best left off your profile....only give to someone to make them special...it can send the wrong message. Niah
Nothing wrong with being young, and a great start. I can see you are new, so I hope you get a positive result soon, but remember, you can send flowers to speed up responses, just not red roses first off. A simple daisy or even a picnic basket....fingers crossed for you. Niah
Well I think the last comment has given a great review, apart from the photo question. I prefer the last one.....and the one you decided as the main one...I'd foget it ever existed.... Niah
Simple profile, but to the point...I did find the age18-21 rather a short span, but then for a young man, I understand why it is so restricted.... However I think it would be an advantage to add a full length photo. Niah
The profile seems fine, nothing wrong at all, and as for the younger lady. You could find you attract some of the wrong ladies, but there is no easy way to cope...other than visit them. Niah
Well I am sure you are trying to appear clever, but crossing between txt and small and large captions, is confusing and un-necessary, and makes reading your profile difficult. I am sure you can spell correctly, or maybe you cannot???? Niah
Well not a bad profile, but I did feel it could read smoother, as sometime you duplicate....and this can lead to people skipping words or sentences. So work through, cutting the extra phrases, and as you are new...time to do some research on the ladies in your area, and send a few flowers....but not red roses, just simple flowers to start with. Good luck...Niah
Well I hope you are new....because if not it would be sad you had so few hits. I don't think the pic works, however artistic. The text for the lady means you haven't given enough though to the topic, so think more on what you would enjoy sharing with a lady. I think if you treat it as a bit of fun, that is how it will be viewed. I think you need to get a more focused approach. Just give it some thought and have another go. Niah
Well you seem popular by your views....so I wonder why you need a profile review, but although the pictures are okay, I prefer the final one of the 3 to be the main profile pic. Didn't think the middle one was good enough to attract the right lady if I'm truthful. Overall, a good profile...just we differ on the photos...but then I am a lady. Niah
Well I think it's pretty good, and certainly shows your arty side... I would think the word profile fits best, but that is the 'arty side,' coming to the fore. All pictures are okay, and you will gradually fine tweak it as you get used to the kind of ladies that contact you. Regarding the lady you want to attract... I read for awhile wondering when I would reach the punch line...but it's there....just tagged way on the end...maybe you could make that seem more important. Niah
I have to admit about the photos....you must smile...look at least happy not glum as no ladies will be attracted by a glum face, so allow a smile to light up your photo's. Next I'll focus on the reels of 'I want'.... regarding the lady you hope to find....and the format changed part way...run on sentences, before returning to something close to a numbered list again. Reading carefully, you could cut that list in half maybe more, by removing and linking other subjects together. It's great you bothered to think of the points you like, but boredom sets in before halfway, and you said you hate to share you personal history...well telling all is just that, and only the important things are necessary. For a Leo, there has to be a lion hiding in there....just try to be more positive.... Niah
Hi. I think the problem comes with expressing yourself, due to English language skills, so I would go through the text carefully, maybe ask a friend if they can help, and check the wording.....but it's a good profile overall, and you are a handsome young man...so I doubt you will have any real problems....just need some time and patience.... Niah
For a school teacher, I would have expected better English writing skills, but it could depend on your subjects. I have several friends who insist they learnt English as children, though not perfectly, but they were not school teachers with a master degree. I was unable to decide if you wanted to remain in your country, or looking for a wife further a field, and that I think needs to be expanded. It is certainly a very formal serious profile... niah
Mixed messages....was my overall thought. Does wealth and security come into friendship...but then you opened with the statement you are still single? The photo isn't the best, and for hanging out....would you expect the ladies to travel to you. I think you are in denial what you actually want.....Niah
Well okay...I understand the first comment didn't like the caption size...but I thought the opening Single....very smart.. Yes, you could expand the profile text, and use small caption, but I didn't think it was that bad.... Niah
I have to agree with vyolta.... Now I know I have no picture....and truthfully, it has never been a problem, but I do have a full text, and I am known because of my poetry, so.....expand your text, and not sure what type of lady you are looking for...being some might object to your...in the sack reference.... just give it some more thought. Niah
Hi.... Well I won't mention a extra picture as I have none and it hasn't caused me problems....as long as your text says enough, and it does. I admit to reading back a few times, believing you'd repeated some sentences, but you hadn't. With some care, it could be reduced...but again, those that want to read through, will. I found it interesting, but was surprised no Favourites, so you must be new....and that will soon change. Yes I think you achieved a balance, and showed your character. Niah
seems a nice easy profile....though did find the pic a bit dark, and it might be wise to add a couple of extra photos as you can. The few hits I would imagine is because you are new, but overall, great profile, so to increase hits, get known...send flowers and messages.....might take some homework, but nothing ventured, nothing gained. Niah
Since hugs are all important, I say I like your tags...but not sure if I should be responding to a profile of someone who objects to us who have no pic......LOL Anyway....since you have over a thousand hits and one fav., you seem to be well on the way to success, and yes, I think a great profile....so patience or send a few messages and flowers to those ladies who fit your ideal....Niah
I think it's to do with patience...and even for me, used to reading long profiles and written text, found yours excessive....sorry. But it is impatience more than anything, but as suggested, start the ball rolling, send some messages and flowers, but not red roses....yet. I did think the pics were a bit too alike, and please don't comment because I have none.... sometimes less is more, and one with you smoking, a turn off for those of us who don't like the habit, and was won over by the 'trying to quit.' Tauranga is a busy city, and where I would imagine there are planty of ladies locally, well, in the surrounding districts, so just start the ball rolling and wait.....patiently Niah
Very good direct profile, but I am confused why nearly 600 views, but not on Fav.... I think it must be the follow up...maybe you need to work harder there....Niah
Well...not sure if you are updating your profile, because your hits and favourites are quite impressive... I do feel the text runs into itself and make it harder to read, so I would sort that, and use capitals where necessary with spaces. But I think living at Clacton -on-Sea and having a healthy look, you will soon have the lady of your dreams...just pay a little more time to presentation...Niah
Can't remember reading any of your poety on Poets Corner...a good wat to meet new people on CS. But before you improve your profile...you really must smile. It don't have to be side splitting grins...but happy you must look. It'll make all the difference. I think it needs more work, but this is a start. Niah
I don't think the profile is that bad...but I do feel you have to do some homework...ie....go through the ladies profiles and select a few nice young ladies to send messages and flowers too, not wait for them to seek you out...you might be waiting a long time. And you could sound a bit more interested, which the other ladies also picked up on....Niah.
You say friends/hang out.... which implies physical meeting..not email/pen friend etc online.....so they need to be living or visiting you...now do you understand.....Niah
It did strike me you are saying negatives about the type of lady you hope to meet...not easy to pin point, but petty in my mind....must weigh less than me...won't eat greasy food....surely alot of that goes without saying if someone is healthy focused....how about smiling alot..happy...caring and so on....likes the planet, shares my interests....Niah
RE: Am I that scary or to smart or do I have victum pasted to my forehead?
It's a shame the final photo is so dark...as in my opinion, it is by far the best....and should be the main profile pic. Look at the other photos and ask...are they necessary?Yes, I agree with the spelling, but sometimes less is more, and maybe you have tried too hard, and that males find scary.
If so many never commented...maybe they never wanted to hurt your feelings....
Niah