Those who turn photo's sideways, are usually unsure if they want to be clearly seen, and to be truthful....is annoying and not inviting, because it complicates viewing. Also distance photo's, that make it impossible to see the subject do nothing for your image, so you really must address this issue as it sends a negative message. Of course it would be good to add more photo's....right way up and close up important.
Written text needs to be expanded, and if you have hobbies, try using TAGS to connect with like minded ladies. As for asking what needs to go.....adjust photo's meaning turn right way up, because there is no surplus to remove.... That I have covered.....and as dating means local ladies, research those who live close, and send flowers to those you feel attracted too..... Niah
Although the second photo is a little blurred, I do think it is the best photo for impact, when viewed amongst a page of other profiles. Sometimes by expanding on the boxed details, it can come across as trying to hard.....but a good profile....Niah
From a female point of view, many may see the dating as non committal on your part....so that might need some serious thought, though you have had plenty of views, with just two favourites, so again, there could be your reason. Ladies age could be extended, because again I return to the dating, when more mature ladies are not so eager to settle into a relationship, but of course it does depend on the female and it is really good you are focusing on Italian ladies. That is where I would start seriously looking. Send flowers to ladies in your area, and then expand the locality. TAGS are another good angle, whether Italian food, culture or dancing, though you may find ladies who spend their holidays in Italy, may have plans to relocate later. I think more photo's, but on the whole, not a bad profile. Niah
I can never understand why anyone writes a full entry, instead of a simple eye catching sentence, then repeats the whole thing again....which really isn't necessary. The lack of a photo has to be acceptable, especially with a detailed written text, but it is going to make it even harder to get to know any ladies, as they will be super cautious. Niah
Because you have chosen Dating, you have restricted yourself to your local area, so that is the place to start. Send flowers to all ladies in that area that you are attracted too, though I believe you may have to spread your net wider. TAGS are another good place to start, by comparing interests and locality. But my advice is to respond to all ladies who view your profile, wherever they come from, even if only to develop your communication skills. Who knows, you might at sometime be able to travel to meet a lady, and she you. I thought your profile was a good start, and will develop I am sure as you get more used to dating online, but it is always better for you to send messages, instead of waiting for them. Niah.
Dating implies the lady lives in your location, so if you are serious, best consider changing that. Apart from that, a good profile that will improve as developed. So my advice is first decide where you want to meet ladies, and serious or casual.....Niah
You may travel, but I do not believe it confuses grammar, so why and I quote......do you write in the opening sentence..... do you like mine pics..... surely it should be 'my.'
Next ladies do not like males who tell them they are attractive, and fish for compliments, so that needs to be changed.
Remember a profile review is just that, a way to help you improve your profile.... and I have to agree with the hair colour mentioned in the previous comment... so I hope you have something constructive to focus on, as well as adding a few more photos. Niah
I think I would note the boxes filled in, and query the eyes as hazel is possible, even possible with strawberry blonde hair....just....though not usual. But in the profile photo's, you truly appear to have dark hair. The written text didn't flow easily for me either.... Niah
Not a bad idea to include a photo when you've just rolled out of bed....but maybe wise to include one when you are clean-tidy and about to go out as well....to give balance......or nothing to compare with. Not a bad profile, but might be an idea to explain what you enjoy and would share with a lady.....though I felt the information was shared about being a dog owner, as a warning. You mentioned friend, but in text boxes, it was long-term. Maybe you have just decided you really are looking seriously? Niah
Apart from the written text not flowing, it's a simple and to the point profile. I would however reread it a few times and consider making some simple adjustments, followed by a spell check....before you re post. Niah
If it happened all the time, maybe you could get upset, but after one delay, I think you should give benefit of the doubt. Or maybe you was becoming boring..... You state 100 miles from where you live, so you certainly want local ladies which is fine, but realise you are restriction numbers too, so maybe it would be wise to expand your age guide. Also expand your written text and not wait for ladies to contact you. Do some research, and send flowers to ladies you find attractive, the you may end texting more than one lady at once..... Add more photos, and use a smile to encourage ladies to contact you.....Niah
I managed to read the written text from beginning to end, with a few back tracks when I couldn't make sense of it... why, because there is no punctuation, and the words run into each other....so very confusing. Add to that no photo, and I would imagine not many ladies will bother contacting you, so...... To improve, a photo would be good....read through your written text, linking words into clear sentences with commas and full stops. But it is a start.... Niah
I believe I mentioned in the last profile review....less is more... I feel you have done a great job reducing the main written text, but found the extension of variety in text boxes, rather OTT. Are they all necessary.....I don't think they are.... But an improvement anyway....Niah
I have to agree with the previous comment....capitals is actually shouting in written text, and a few more photos, some without the hat and full length would be a positive move. When ladies see a man who has not been in a relationship, they become aware that it's difficult to adjust to a lifestyle of sharing as a couple. That you flat with a friend means you are used to a form of sharing, but not the same. Remember the saying, Men are from Mars and Ladies from Venus. I also agree, you will need maturity in a relationship, and a 18 year old is a young woman, but probably lacking life skills....so a higher age range....would be easier, though they are usually stronger .....mentally and may come with children. Niah
All your photo's are more posed than natural, and with close to 400 views and not one favourite, I think ladies are making it clear how they feel. Maybe you expected ladies to contacting you and they are not, so time to realise you have to try a little harder. Go through TAGS and select a few that can enhance your profile. Think about changing some of the photo's.....sending flowers and who ever views your profile, make a commitment to send them and message or flower. Dating might be a better place to start too, and ladies do not give compliments because promted. Niah
Look on your headings at the top of your screen, and select LOCAL. Send messages and flowers to all the ladies who live in an area you believe is acceptable for dating and you are attracted too. Add more photos, especially with smiles.....and look through TAGS, there might be something there that can link you to ladies who share your interests.....but ladies do like males to make the first move....Niah
Impatience....is not viewed favourable, meaning adding personal contact details to speed up the process, can mean ladies who are seriously looking for a life partner, will not contact you directly. Instead they prefer remaining on here for security until trust is earned. With such a high number of views, and only 1 favourite, proves your profile has attracted ladies, but the outcome has not been good. I would say spend more time on your written profile, and check through carefully. Remove the personal information, and take the slow route, meaning communication on here. Your profile isn't bad, just I believe it's sending the wrong messages.....and yes, a smile will help. Niah
I think your profile could be termed......misleading, but with dating, I gather you are seeking a lady living in the same location as you..... Dating would be impossible if travel from another country was involved.....
Mixed messages....occur during the written text that ends in a ramble, but because of the hobby/occupation focus, I wonder if TAGS would be a good option to locate a lady with the same interests? Pen pal/email...etc., yet you state a lady who lives within 100 miles of your location....not dating which I would have expected....... as I said, mixed messages. My advice is to read through your profile focused on improving, even if it means reducing and thinking about the wording and presentation. You are new on here, but some ladies have viewed the profile, but none have become a favourite, so maybe you must research ladies in that 100 miles, and contact them.... Niah
I find it very obvious bordering strange you have a join name of male and female on your profile, and I think it could do more harm than good. Believing other photo's used will drag the profile down, and it would be wise to replace them with light and clear photographs for the next generation.
I agree with both previous comments, as both have valid points, and come from different directions. I would listen to the advice given, and adapt your profile to improve, because there is room for improvement. Niah
It's over a year since I first commented, and although you have a photo now, you still have no favourites.....yet ladies have viewed your profile, but gone no further...so my advice is.... I am sure the photo posted is not the best you could find....and a cropped version would improve impact of the image. Also add a few more varied photos. Some wording is rather negative, so read the profile a few times, and imagine how it will be viewed. Next making it clear you only want beautiful ladies younger than you, is not a way to wing ladies trust. Often if they believe they will be updated as the first chance, they take a wide berth, In actual fact, I believe it will stop any initial contact from ladies, whatever age they are..... Niah
Well at least you state all your material belongings were left in storage, so you have no doubts about returning someday, it could be the location that is holding some ladies back, but then, you have 2 favourites, and a lot of hits, but maybe you answered your own question. Do you expect ladies to contact you? I never retained the outcome you hope, but somehow, I think it may not be marriage you are seeking.....maybe I am wrong, but relocating to China for some without commitment, might be rather difficult. Niah
You are sending mixed messages....Friends and Hang out, mixed with how a lady should act in the bedroom, is hardly going to encourage ladies to contact you, just like the lack of a smile.
The profile written text also appears one sided, so maybe you need to explain how you will wine and dine a lady, making them feel special when they become your friend.....
The filled in information boxes are what ladies usually view first, and they are answered well, but maybe you need to consider a more varied approach to photos especially with a smile, and serious thought about the written text, which may be enhanced by using TAGS. But a good start. Niah
Seriously would turn those photo's, to right way.....it isn't cute, most find it annoying and un-necessary...though not sure it's wise to state....I am good looking.....I'd allow the ladies to decide that and it doesn't hurt to smile.....
Apart from those points I mentioned, a good profile that would be improved by a spell check.
Send flowers, and always respond to anyone who views your profile or sends a message..... Niah
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RE: Room for improvement?
Those who turn photo's sideways, are usually unsure if they want to be clearly seen, and to be truthful....is annoying and not inviting, because it complicates viewing.Also distance photo's, that make it impossible to see the subject do nothing for your image, so you really must address this issue as it sends a negative message. Of course it would be good to add more photo's....right way up and close up important.
Written text needs to be expanded, and if you have hobbies, try using TAGS to connect with like minded ladies.
As for asking what needs to go.....adjust photo's meaning turn right way up, because there is no surplus to remove....
That I have covered.....and as dating means local ladies, research those who live close, and send flowers to those you feel attracted too.....
Niah