Hi, I'd like a profile review :]

So I'm wondering if my profile works and if it sounds, or looks appealing.
Did I add in too much in my description box? I kind of don't want to get people to feel pressured to talk to me, and do I come off friendly, or too much? (I've seen a few other profiles already, and well, their descriptions are only 2 lines long. Guess I was too into writing myself out, eh?)
Anyway, thanks all those in advance for their rational responses! I appreciate.