whitedrew411th Review Details
whitedrew411th
Oshkosh Wisconsin, Wisconsin, USA
Aug 10, 2014 2:01 AM CST
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Hi,
I hope most things are well with you.
I am in total agreement with niah9. You seriously should consider the a fore mentioned. Additionally, keep similar ideas in the same paragraph. For example, tell the reader about you, in one paragraph and in another, state the things you do not appreciate. Keep them separate so as not to confuse the reader.
Remember to go through and do the editing.
Best wishes
Gaille
I hope most things are well with you.
I am in total agreement with niah9. You seriously should consider the a fore mentioned. Additionally, keep similar ideas in the same paragraph. For example, tell the reader about you, in one paragraph and in another, state the things you do not appreciate. Keep them separate so as not to confuse the reader.
Remember to go through and do the editing.
Best wishes
Gaille
Feb 24, 2015 7:24 PM CST
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