I think Spell Check may help you. Other than that, you need to learn that you are NOT perfect. Your looks won't last forever. If you have only superficiality to fall back on...you have nothing.
I think your profile is very well done. The only thing I might change is your profile photo. The shirt is too busy. You have such a wonderful smile and such a kind face that you need to let that be the center of attention and not the shirt. You have many positive attributes. You seem like a great catch. If I were younger, I would soooo go for you. Well, younger, and closer to you.
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I think Spell Check may help you. Other than that, you need to learn that you are NOT perfect. Your looks won't last forever. If you have only superficiality to fall back on...you have nothing.