RE: What is wrong?

Take out picture 8.
And maybe picture 4.

Ur first one now is really great!

RE: Is this thing working!! lol

Yes enough info to atleast scare me off. But the profile is in most part good so don't get me wrong.

Regarding the pictures: 1 & 2 good (especially 1), nr.3 i dislike. Know it's your sweet mouth but... ehh.. abit close up perhaps.

Before i go: if you get no success with it the way it is now do not start to cry but soften it up abit instead.

I think you can find what you look for here but u gotta be abit flexible. Not every man can dance to your tune only-
"it's a little give and take"

Good luck now. Be patient. I been here 1.5y myself.
Hope you will work faster then me.

cheers

RE: To be fair

Hay, come home! We been looking all over for you! U runaway child! You're grounded for 3 days now! laugh

Shay, u r gr8! Ok? lips

hug

RE: I'm new here and would appreciate honest feedback

No, nothing else from me atleast. Ur text is uniqe. A very good invitation to the right man, who feels invited to just THAT! Think that last dance is gonna be a loong lovely dance! If i was 10y older i'd put in an application!

Isent it strange one has to be either 10y old or mature to fully aprichiate that 'mud between the toes'?!

Good luck!
thumbs up

RE: review of profile

Start with that (viking's tip) and see also if u can spice up ur ad abit, somehow. maybe also add a second pic, one showing ur face in profile or sth, or where u are doing sth (some activety), outdoors or similar. Bring more life into it, even though dont need to overdoo it. Cos u'll lose the uniqness.
i like that in ur profile.

At the end of 'im looking for'
there is some detail.. "and the same goes for HIM." maybe better?

I just have to mention this little detail too:
At the end of 'about me' "i'd be more than happy to SHARE?" .. replace it with TELL. or replace the sentence with "...just ask and we can get to know each other."

Do some changes there hon, and see if it has an effect. Can't hurt can it? Bust wishes.dancing

Any other q's for me on this, mail me.

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