No, nothing else from me atleast. Ur text is uniqe. A very good invitation to the right man, who feels invited to just THAT! Think that last dance is gonna be a loong lovely dance! If i was 10y older i'd put in an application!
Isent it strange one has to be either 10y old or mature to fully aprichiate that 'mud between the toes'?!
Start with that (viking's tip) and see also if u can spice up ur ad abit, somehow. maybe also add a second pic, one showing ur face in profile or sth, or where u are doing sth (some activety), outdoors or similar. Bring more life into it, even though dont need to overdoo it. Cos u'll lose the uniqness. i like that in ur profile.
At the end of 'im looking for' there is some detail.. "and the same goes for HIM." maybe better?
I just have to mention this little detail too: At the end of 'about me' "i'd be more than happy to SHARE?" .. replace it with TELL. or replace the sentence with "...just ask and we can get to know each other."
Do some changes there hon, and see if it has an effect. Can't hurt can it? Bust wishes.
RE: What is wrong?
Take out picture 8.And maybe picture 4.
Ur first one now is really great!