I think you should take out your previous experience with ex hasbuned as that is very private and leave that for later when man earnes your trust and confidence. Good luck.
I am not critical in picking mistakes in spelling if I find that substance sounds honest and respectful and your handsome but personally I would prefer to see man in cloths.
I think you have lovely smile and expressing yourself well.I don't see anything that you need to change,just wandering why are you looking for much older women too. I think you missed to clarify what are you specifically looking for to find in relationship,is it marriage =to make family =children,what ever ?Good luck.
RE: I'm in serious need of help
I think friends and hangouts doesn't sound as serious offer for long term relationship that presumably most people looking for.