Lovely picture! But, better to write in complete sentences than text talking (abbreviations, etc.). How about this: "I love both indoor and outdoor sports, socializing and having fun. I can be picky at times. I love speaking the truth and hanging out with friends, watching movies and cruising around. I enjoy the rain and taking baths. I'm also down to Earth and easy to mingle with." Looking for: "One handsome guy who knows how to love a lady like me. Age or race is not a barrier as long as you have a good sense of humor."
You can start by getting rid of all of those dancing icons - very distracting! I agree with Niah in that you could make your profile a little more brief and to the point about who you are.
As a novelist, it is no surprise you write a good profile. It is clear, succinct, it reveals a little about your personality, it has a sense of humor. I agree with niah that you could use a better close up picture. It is important for women to see your eyes, the windows of the soul.
RE: Hopes Up High
Lovely picture! But, better to write in complete sentences than text talking (abbreviations, etc.). How about this: "I love both indoor and outdoor sports, socializing and having fun. I can be picky at times. I love speaking the truth and hanging out with friends, watching movies and cruising around. I enjoy the rain and taking baths. I'm also down to Earth and easy to mingle with."Looking for: "One handsome guy who knows how to love a lady like me. Age or race is not a barrier as long as you have a good sense of humor."