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May 25, 2010 3:43 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
Shelter from the Rain.

Young and full of adventure she wanted to seek her destination, having a month to take her journey to the unknown, she packed her gear and set off.. Took her jeep and set out pin pointing her stops on the map.....

Her Jeep was a Willy open convertible....she a well bodied blond with stunning eyes, her tanned body shined with sparkles. She wore just a cut off pair of jeans and a white top, showing all the right curves in the right places....

As she drove for miles on a dusty road, when suddenly strange noises came from under the hood, following with a full stop............She had a break down, the weather was good so she took a look , but not knowing what was wrong......looked around and saw in the distance a house, taken her chance locked her jeep and she started to walk towards it..... it was at least 4 miles so she paced on.....as dark clouds came over and she had no protection what so ever she seeded up her pace............just a mile to go,when a summer rain shower came down in force tempo, soaking her to the skin, her blond hair dripping on her white shirt and her feet muddy and soaping she reacher the house......

It looked deserted, as she panther for air....she looked around calling out “ hello anybody home....but no response....

Suddenly she heard a thumping sound coming from a barn....so she went to see, as she opened the barn door.....she startled, she blushed with fright to see a most handsome well build guy cutting wood for the fire......he wore a thorn lumber jack shirt with muscles that glowed with transpiration.....his firm body hung over the logs...so strong so many....

Hi! she called out, he glanced over with his stunning blue eyes and answered......can I help you!
She voice cracked as she attempt to answer, he dropped his Axe and mover towards her...she just stood there completely overwhelmed by him.

Her cloths dripping down as she explained what had happened, he didn't hesitate for a second and said come , we will drive back with my pickup and tow it here.....they left, his windows started to fog up due to her wet cloths....they towed the jeep back to the house and left it as it still rained...

Come in side and heat yourself up he said with a deep masculine voice, she hesitated , but she had to get out of those clothes...

Once inside the warmth of the house with its cozy atmosphere over whelmed her and she felt at home......the Hugh log fire was burning....she asked why the fire was burning, he replies that bad weather was on its way and that it could be days before they would see sun again....

Oh! she replied guess I am stuck here then.....well at least for to day as there no way your are going anywhere, I have to see what wrong first....so take a coffee, change into some dry clothes and make your self at home............

She had a problem as her jeep being a Willy has no roof, so her change of clothes were wet too...
he said don't worry I am sure I have something that will fit you......

as she sipped her coffee by the fire while he went to get some clothes, she wondered why such a handsome man was alone.....
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May 25, 2010 3:56 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
You may leave comments.................Please!!teddybear
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May 25, 2010 4:03 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
cincity
cincitycincitytoronto, Ontario Canada9 Threads 2,496 Posts
wonderful writing....
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May 25, 2010 4:03 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
Wolly Wollyyyyyyyyy AGAIN u took me back to times gone by when young and in love Thank You hug hug Nice Reading thumbs up
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May 25, 2010 4:05 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
cincity: wonderful writing....


Thank u...............wine
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May 25, 2010 4:08 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
Nuliiiiiii: Wolly Wollyyyyyyyyy AGAIN u took me back to times gone by when young and in love Thank You Nice Reading


Yeah! it does, those good old days................smitten smitten smitten Thank you Darls...hug hug bouquet
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May 25, 2010 4:11 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
offbeat58
offbeat58offbeat58edmonton, Alberta Canada13 Threads 1,126 Posts
such a cool short story...wondering if that will happen to me now...been raining enough but nobody has showed up at my doorblues
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May 25, 2010 4:17 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
offbeat58: such a cool short story...wondering if that will happen to me now...been raining enough but nobody has showed up at my door



ahh! Offie..u are one of a kind....hug did ya try chopping some wood....grin bouquet Thank u teddybear
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May 25, 2010 4:22 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
Costapacket
CostapacketCostapacketparis, Centre-Val de Loire France2 Threads 2,182 Posts
wheres that axe! im off to the wood shed...(cant find the panting icon).....laugh
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May 25, 2010 4:23 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
Peeps.................those who read this, I would really appricate a comment, I am still in the baby steps with writting, so any comments are welcome...............Good or bad...

Publishing my first book this Summer.....bouquet
uh oh uh oh
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May 25, 2010 4:24 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
Costapacket: wheres that axe! im off to the wood shed...(cant find the panting icon).....


U gonna kill some one.......................uh oh uh oh uh oh wave
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May 25, 2010 4:27 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
Costapacket: wheres that axe! im off to the wood shed...(cant find the panting icon).....



wood shed far.................laugh laugh
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May 25, 2010 4:30 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
demonfairy
demonfairydemonfairyNewton,hickory, North Carolina USA120 Threads 17 Polls 5,654 Posts
wine Makes you believe any thing can happen,gezz smitten very nice storyhug
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May 25, 2010 4:32 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
demonfairy: Makes you believe any thing can happen,gezz very nice story


Yep..............just dream away...wave Thank u..bouquet
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May 25, 2010 4:35 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
Wishing you all a good night, happy dreams.............wave wave teddybear
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May 25, 2010 4:36 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
trulee01
trulee01trulee01lake worth, Florida USA49 Threads 1 Polls 2,406 Posts
When is the movie coming out.dunno Need an actor?yay
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May 25, 2010 4:38 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
trulee01: When is the movie coming out. Need an actor?



laugh laugh Are u volenteering.....wink wink wave

any ´good with a axe???rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
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May 25, 2010 6:08 PM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
trulee01
trulee01trulee01lake worth, Florida USA49 Threads 1 Polls 2,406 Posts
PollyWolly: Are u volenteering.....

any ´good with a axe???
No.thumbs down But I could sharpen up a bit.thumbs up grin
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May 26, 2010 4:40 AM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
PollyWolly
PollyWollyPollyWollyJust North of Amsterdam.., North Holland Netherlands27 Threads 3,889 Posts
trulee01: No. But I could sharpen up a bit.


Cheers...............cheers Have a great day...hug
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May 26, 2010 9:23 AM CST Shelter from the rain..!!
RayfromUSA
RayfromUSARayfromUSAvienne, Rhone-Alpes France86 Threads 29 Polls 6,611 Posts
I'm good with a chainsaw.
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