my award winning poem (8)

Jul 17, 2007 11:43 PM CST my award winning poem
WHITEROSE40
WHITEROSE40WHITEROSE40courtenay, British Columbia Canada85 Threads 432 Posts
Ode to disabled persons
This is a poem dedicated to to all persons with disabilites.

I am a whiterose,
I may not have the beauty of full luscious petals,
and a magestic stem.
but when you really look upon me,
you will see that not all beauty is tangible.
I have my petals and my thorns,
but I also a sweet fragrance,
that needs to be embraced.
So when you see me blooming in a garden,
and I am not all you envisioned,
take a closer look, and gaze upon me,
smell my fragrance and discover my beauty.
Then behold me.


Laurie L Edberg
Copyright ©2007 Laurie L Edberg
Jul 19, 2007 1:20 AM CST my award winning poem
WHITEROSE40
WHITEROSE40WHITEROSE40courtenay, British Columbia Canada85 Threads 432 Posts
o come on guys,no comments. i won a award for this poem.
Jul 19, 2007 2:09 AM CST my award winning poem
WHITEROSE40
WHITEROSE40WHITEROSE40courtenay, British Columbia Canada85 Threads 432 Posts
BTW,pardon me for posting my name on here. but i had to cause its my poem and i have the copyright.
if it wasn't for that. i wouldn't of defied the posting rules.
Jul 19, 2007 7:08 AM CST my award winning poem
littleblondemon
littleblondemonlittleblondemonSt. Barthelemy, Quebec Canada3 Threads 188 Posts
Very nice poem Whiterose thumbs up hug
Jul 19, 2007 3:47 PM CST my award winning poem
Numbercruncher
NumbercruncherNumbercruncherTimmins, Ontario Canada29 Posts
wonderfulwave
Jul 19, 2007 3:50 PM CST my award winning poem
foxyone1
foxyone1foxyone1Quesnel BC, British Columbia Canada50 Threads 1,772 Posts
ok,, got goose bumps reading that,, right on,, way to go
Jul 19, 2007 5:08 PM CST my award winning poem
WHITEROSE40
WHITEROSE40WHITEROSE40courtenay, British Columbia Canada85 Threads 432 Posts
THankyou everyone
Jul 23, 2007 7:03 PM CST my award winning poem
WHITEROSE40
WHITEROSE40WHITEROSE40courtenay, British Columbia Canada85 Threads 432 Posts
i was hoping for more interests and replies to my poem
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