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Sep 8, 2007 1:16 PM CST forever
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
forever

she came from a world
of trust and acquiescence
where shame faded
into the distant night
where old coats doubled as blankets
and strange words were uttered
in hushed secret whispers
the habitual patterns of
shared experiences
dimmed into normality
“least said"
"soonest mended”
yet the end
didn’t come
and the burgeoning
inadequacies
strove for release
screaming deeply inside her
against the spellbinding words
“our little secret”
“just you and me”
horror mixed with respect
served to forestall
any cry for help
creating guilt and dread
which would play
in her mind
forever
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Sep 8, 2007 1:20 PM CST forever
minimoo
minimoominimooDublin, Ireland123 Threads 1,537 Posts
grin thumbs up
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Sep 8, 2007 1:21 PM CST forever
beejay
beejaybeejaySt. Truiden, Limburg Belgium50 Threads 1,413 Posts
The sky has holes

where the rain gets in

they're only small holes

that's why rain is thin
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Sep 8, 2007 1:40 PM CST forever
Verthandi
VerthandiVerthandiAugusta, Maine USA9 Threads 87 Posts
You captured the secret well.
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