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Sep 17, 2007 5:39 AM CST Alone-
lovesome1
lovesome1lovesome1Baldwin, Kansas USA22 Threads 259 Posts
I sit against a darken tree and stare up at the moon,when a voice calls out to me like a whisper swaying softly in the wind,telling me the night shall past by soon.Don't look so sad my friend for i reconize these tears you shed and have seen your reasons why,that you hide again each night beneath this mighty oak and hang your head to cry.Your heart reveils to me of a love long since gone though the memories still refusing to let her go, but listen to me my friend, this ship will never sail again,the winds in her sail shall never blow.She was washed away long ago by the oceans tides and has ventured off across its sea,so i asks that you cry no more for she's to long gone now, so please just let her memory be. Pick up yourself and begin to start again, for it's almost the dawn of a whole new day,and mark my words when the time is right you'll find love again and this time she won't wish to sail away.Good-bye until tomorrow!-Kellycrying crying crying
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Sep 17, 2007 5:41 AM CST Alone-
Hugz_n_Kissez
Hugz_n_KissezHugz_n_KissezSomeplace, Ontario Canada59 Threads 2 Polls 25,438 Posts
That's a beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!


thumbs up wine wine
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Sep 17, 2007 5:46 AM CST Alone-
lovesome1
lovesome1lovesome1Baldwin, Kansas USA22 Threads 259 Posts
Thank-you i'm glad you liked it,couldn't sleep so i decided to write,and this is what i came up with-Kellyhug kiss
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Sep 17, 2007 5:47 AM CST Alone-
markizamkd25
markizamkd25markizamkd25Skive, Central Jutland Denmark235 Threads 5 Polls 4,706 Posts
crying crying crying
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Sep 17, 2007 5:49 AM CST Alone-
lovesome1
lovesome1lovesome1Baldwin, Kansas USA22 Threads 259 Posts
this is what happens when i have to much time to think-kiss hug
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Sep 17, 2007 6:46 AM CST Alone-
Unicornelle
UnicornelleUnicornelleQuebec, Canada47 Threads 1,675 Posts
Lovely poem written by a lovely person....kiss
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Sep 17, 2007 7:37 AM CST Alone-
Verthandi
VerthandiVerthandiAugusta, Maine USA9 Threads 87 Posts
Very nicely done. It sounds very healing and that pieces are going to start falling in place for you to move on.
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Sep 17, 2007 7:39 AM CST Alone-
sbrooksie34
sbrooksie34sbrooksie34bristol, Bristol, England UK1 Threads 111 Posts
wow wow wow fantastic jaw drop
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Sep 17, 2007 3:03 PM CST Alone-
Venus69
Venus69Venus69San Diego, California USA3 Threads 175 Posts
Your poem moved me so much! It was so nice seeing and feeling that soft side of you. It is like magic how the Universe works for us, it knows when we are ready to move on and then puts us on the right track to find the right person, I feel yours is coming soon.smitten love kiss
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Sep 17, 2007 3:10 PM CST Alone-
lovesome1
lovesome1lovesome1Baldwin, Kansas USA22 Threads 259 Posts
thanks sweetyblushing blushing wink kiss hug cheers
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Sep 17, 2007 3:11 PM CST Alone-
Venus69
Venus69Venus69San Diego, California USA3 Threads 175 Posts
Anything For You My Dear! wave
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Sep 17, 2007 3:13 PM CST Alone-
b_n_d
b_n_db_n_dGlasgow, USA60 Threads 3,675 Posts
Nice.thumbs up comfort
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Sep 17, 2007 3:22 PM CST Alone-
prncss4someone
prncss4someoneprncss4someoneHopeful, Michigan USA57 Threads 8 Polls 7,227 Posts
blues very beautiful

here's to a new day wine
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Sep 17, 2007 3:34 PM CST Alone-
roseofsharon
roseofsharonroseofsharonmanchester, Hampshire, England UK60 Threads 3 Polls 8,699 Posts
wow ...thats wow! smitten
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Sep 19, 2007 7:21 PM CST Alone-
Takamatsu
TakamatsuTakamatsutian'men, Guangxi China9 Posts
i consider it a prose ratner than a poem,however,a moving one.you bring back the night to us you sitting alone by some oak.i really enjoy it.thumbs up
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Sep 19, 2007 7:24 PM CST Alone-
Fallenangel74
Fallenangel74Fallenangel74southern, British Columbia Canada5 Threads 879 Posts
Well sweetheart nicely done. It is beautiful.angel
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Sep 19, 2007 7:25 PM CST Alone-
ShortyRed
ShortyRedShortyRedAthens, Tennessee USA6 Threads 624 Posts
Nice poem


Just a little hard not to giggle everytime I looked at your pic...........rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
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Sep 20, 2007 12:30 AM CST Alone-
lovesome1
lovesome1lovesome1Baldwin, Kansas USA22 Threads 259 Posts
is it my ears?rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
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Sep 20, 2007 12:34 AM CST Alone-
Rickster
RicksterRicksterNew York, USA24 Threads 3,362 Posts
That wascool

Thanksthumbs up
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