Unfeeling heart ( Archived) (5)

Sep 27, 2007 6:04 AM CST Unfeeling heart
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
There are no feelings here
no soul to open to the sun,
the sky is nondescript,
awash with dying clouds
from last night's rain,
all light filtered down
through water tinged
with dust, Sahara dust
that clings to skin,
that makes asthmatics
wheeze, eyes burn,
eyes seek release
in tears that will not flow
because there are
no feelings here
no soul all filled to bursting
with great joy, the trees hang
motionless as air itself
has ceased to breathe
birds screech instead of sing
as feral cats weave sly patterns
that promise death
and breakfast
in the shadows of the grass
all richly green and lush
from rain that fell
like tears I cannot shed
because
there are no feelings here.
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Sep 27, 2007 6:21 AM CST Unfeeling heart
Gothbabe
GothbabeGothbabeDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South Africa59 Threads 2 Polls 1,623 Posts
comfort comfort


hug hug
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Sep 27, 2007 6:26 AM CST Unfeeling heart
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Thanks Alida, actually I am having a great morning. I was just having trouble starting to write because I had no particular emotions bubbling away.

So I wrote about that and the rather dismal atmosphere weatherwise.wave
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Sep 27, 2007 6:43 AM CST Unfeeling heart
Gothbabe
GothbabeGothbabeDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South Africa59 Threads 2 Polls 1,623 Posts
I know that feeling all too well.......maybe the child in me was just comforting myself and I needed a hug as well.

But it's still very sad
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Sep 27, 2007 6:45 AM CST Unfeeling heart
stefonline
stefonlinestefonlineDublin, Ireland136 Threads 9,702 Posts
Where are you.........hug
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