I need your words tonight ( Archived) (4)

Apr 1, 2008 4:20 AM CST I need your words tonight
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
I need your words tonight

standing in the shadow
of lifes past nuances
and ambiguities
I stare into a
mayhem of meanderings
like the gulf stream
spreading condescension
on a an acquiescent earth
I, a mere bit player
on the sidelines of a soap
and I see the tone
of your being
feel the touch
of your tantalising fingers
as your warmth engulfs me
enhances my mind
and takes me
to my craved Valhalla
as I cry into a wind of woe

I need your words tonight
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Apr 1, 2008 4:24 AM CST I need your words tonight
FloraFlora
FloraFloraFloraFloraauckland, Auckland New Zealand4 Threads 97 Posts
class: I need your words tonight


I, a mere bit player
on the sidelines of a soap
and I see the tone
of your being
feel the touch
of your tantalising fingers
as your warmth engulfs me
enhances my mind
and takes me
to my craved Valhalla
as I cry into a wind of woe

I need your words tonight


love oh another lucky lady in the world
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Apr 1, 2008 5:04 AM CST I need your words tonight
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Morning class.

'mayhem of meanderings
like the gulf stream
spreading condescension
on a an acquiescent earth'

Lovely turn of phrase!
thumbs up
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Apr 1, 2008 3:12 PM CST I need your words tonight
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
thanks flora.. ....
thanks bajan :))
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