Waiting for your criticism (17)
No criticism from me, it's beautiful 
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Serenity1971: No criticism from me, it's beautiful
Thank you.You are beautiful too.More beautiful than my silly poem...
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epicure: Thank you.You are beautiful too.More beautiful than my silly poem...
Yes....
Very Beautiful...
as are the Both of you... Night Owls
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it's important to feel everthing. To have passion for for what's going on, otherwise you feel emptiness, sadness.
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cristina: it's important to feel everthing. To have passion for for what's going on, otherwise you feel emptiness, sadness.
oh, sorry, i thought i was at "what's really important in life" thread, i might be back, bye for now
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epicure: Look so green at the world
Make the leaves jelous of you
And the emeralds glitter more
to compete with you
And let 'the rival of your eyes with the nature'
make the world a much more beautiful place
Then the green light in your eyes
grows,growS,groWS,grOWS,gROWS,GROWS
and lightenes all the universe...
Poems are not very meaningful when they are translated to another language,but this is a poem of mine in Turkish and I tried my best to translate it...
.....Very nice epicure..R.Make the leaves jelous of you
And the emeralds glitter more
to compete with you
And let 'the rival of your eyes with the nature'
make the world a much more beautiful place
Then the green light in your eyes
grows,growS,groWS,grOWS,gROWS,GROWS
and lightenes all the universe...
Poems are not very meaningful when they are translated to another language,but this is a poem of mine in Turkish and I tried my best to translate it...
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epicure: Thank you.You are beautiful too.More beautiful than my silly poem...
Thank you, though I don't agree. It's far from a silly poem, you have no idea the visual that I got while reading it. It was incredible. I think I may have to do a new graphic and post it so you can see it too.
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HealthyLiving: Yes....
Very Beautiful...
as are the Both of you... Night Owls
Read cristina's reply before calling oithers 'nigt owls' she doesn't know which tread she is in? started to confuse all :)Very Beautiful...
as are the Both of you... Night Owls
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HealthyLiving: Yes....
Very Beautiful...
as are the Both of you... Night Owls
Very Beautiful...
as are the Both of you... Night Owls
Coming from another beautiful woman, that means a lot. Thank you.Oh and my Night Owl habit thanks you too!
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Serenity1971: Thank you, though I don't agree. It's far from a silly poem, you have no idea the visual that I got while reading it. It was incredible. I think I may have to do a new graphic and post it so you can see it too.
Himmm,let me translate some others and share them with forum fans of cs. or better I start to write directly in English from now on.------ This thread is Archived ------
epicure: Himmm,let me translate some others and share them with forum fans of cs. or better I start to write directly in English from now on.
Why not do both. Translate the ones you have and start writing new ones in English.
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epicure: Look so green at the world
Make the leaves jelous of you
And the emeralds glitter more
to compete with you
And let 'the rival of your eyes with the nature'
make the world a much more beautiful place
Then the green light in your eyes
grows,growS,groWS,grOWS,gROWS,GROWS
and lightenes all the universe...
Poems are not very meaningful when they are translated to another language,but this is a poem of mine in Turkish and I tried my best to translate it...
Make the leaves jelous of you
And the emeralds glitter more
to compete with you
And let 'the rival of your eyes with the nature'
make the world a much more beautiful place
Then the green light in your eyes
grows,growS,groWS,grOWS,gROWS,GROWS
and lightenes all the universe...
Poems are not very meaningful when they are translated to another language,but this is a poem of mine in Turkish and I tried my best to translate it...
Even if the words fow differently the feeling and the passion translate perfectly.
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bajanblue: Even if the words fow differently the feeling and the passion translate perfectly.
should be flow
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epicure: Look so green at the world
Make the leaves jelous of you
And the emeralds glitter more
to compete with you
And let 'the rival of your eyes with the nature'
make the world a much more beautiful place
Then the green light in your eyes
grows,growS,groWS,grOWS,gROWS,GROWS
and lightenes all the universe...
Poems are not very meaningful when they are translated to another language,but this is a poem of mine in Turkish and I tried my best to translate it...
Make the leaves jelous of you
And the emeralds glitter more
to compete with you
And let 'the rival of your eyes with the nature'
make the world a much more beautiful place
Then the green light in your eyes
grows,growS,groWS,grOWS,gROWS,GROWS
and lightenes all the universe...
Poems are not very meaningful when they are translated to another language,but this is a poem of mine in Turkish and I tried my best to translate it...
I WASN'T gonna say your poem was silly, but if you have already decided you are in for criticism BEFORE you have given anyone a chance....??
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we should not worry about how other people perceives us 
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zdeadmanwalking: we should not worry about how other people perceives us
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Make the leaves jelous of you
And the emeralds glitter more
to compete with you
And let 'the rival of your eyes with the nature'
make the world a much more beautiful place
Then the green light in your eyes
grows,growS,groWS,grOWS,gROWS,GROWS
and lightenes all the universe...
Poems are not very meaningful when they are translated to another language,but this is a poem of mine in Turkish and I tried my best to translate it...