DonAsTauno Forum Posts (3)

Should Poetry Which Appears On Connecting Singles Rhyme All The Time?

Some say POE-TAY-TOE. Others say Pa-Tay-Ta.

Some say TOE-MAY-TOE. Others say Ta-Maa-Ta.

What Do You Say About Rhyme or Rime?

Do you demand that rhyme appear in all poetry which appears on this site?

Or do you say Rhyme-Slime!

Image is more important that Rhyme-Slime!

Now is your chance to say something or vice versa!

Canceled

For Naftalie

Give me back
The note
I just wrote,
For I'm afraid
I 've forgotten
The cost of
The stamp of
Death.


(C) Copyright 1997 by Don as Tauno

Have you had suicidal ideation at least once?

Phenomenologically, how can you know the emotional ups if you have not experienced the emotional downs?

The title? Does it refer to the contents of the letter or the stamp being marked un-usable again? What are the implications of each interpretation?

Is it fear which brings on the thoughts of killing oneself or is it the pent up anger? Both? If you feel this way at times, is there someone with whom you can express these emotions?

"Death" has a line of its own. Why?

RE: my poem

Mair is lovely
Yet not petite
She has a thing
About her feet

And the men who
She lets eat
Toe-jam sandwiches
On bread of wheat.

Stalwart she stands
True aesthete
Wanting males, only the sweet
To munch on this toed athlete

Than rather place
Their own feet
Into their own mouths
Like normally maled parakeets.

Squawk!
Cocky WALK!

Dylan Thomas at the pub