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RE: Thoughts anyone?....Trying to get a little feedback

It sounds to me like you've reached deep into your psyche and pulled out what I would call "Art". Art should be appreciated, and not criticized. If you have created this poem sincerely, criticism might seem to be a direct attack on you. Be careful what you ask for on a public forum...

In a nutshell, I would say that you address deep, emotional issues in a simple format. Not an easy combination to pull off, and to be taken seriously. I would suggest with this kind of work, you might look at some of Dickens' or Poe's works. These might give you the feel of an enigmatic script and allow you to express yourself in a more self-satisfactory tone. Overall, I liked it as a draft.