You stress a mature lady, but 18 is hardly that, though 30 is verging on maturity....just, I think you need to read through your written text and take note.
Stating what you enjoy is fine, but maybe state what a lady would share, though you did mention cosy nights in. Sending the image of Jack the Lad is fine, but it could stop some ladies contacting you.
More photo's, with a different focus in my opinion will help and if you believe you are sending mixed messages, it's time to change your wording. Niah

thanks you for your input, really did help :)