Can I say firstly, I found the photos confusing...they may be recent, but they looked so different, and I think will confuse any lady. Really looked like three different men so needs to be addressed.
Also it's great you have returned to college, but it is mentioned too many times, once maybe twice should be enough...I mean the lady won't be going to work with you.
Check you profile and the wording, there are a few mistakes there that can be easily rectified.
I hope you are no focused on a wife to stay home and wait for you, because some ladies want more for themselves than that...but you have on favourite and a few hundred views, so you are on your way and hopefully will get sorted quickly...oh and check your spelling too.
Niah