How do I say this nicely... The first thing that I noticed is that you used the word "ogre" to describe women who you do not find attractive.

If your education and intelligence are above average, as you claim, then you ought to know better than to describe those people who you personally find unattractive by such a term. Moreover, you might want to correct your English. Grammatical errors are not a sign of an above average education.

You conclude that a person who moves furniture a lot also does not know what she wants in life. Okay Doctor Freud, I trust you have enough empirical evidence to support your theory By your logic, a person who makes grammatical errors due to carlessness (if not due to ignorance) must not be too interested in seriously finding a partner.

Any woman who is reasonably intelligent and not an ogre will notice what I noticed and simply on the basis of those points dismiss your profile.

My suggestion is to rethink and rewrite the whole thing.

Hi Narnia,

thanks for your feedback and good luck for you too.

I agree with Scuba and feel free to lose that pic of you posing in your suit. Pink is not the best color for men. Good luck.

Ich habe Dir einen review geschrieben (bzw das ganze Profil), aber kann Dir das nicht via cs email schicken weil Du keine Post von dieser Region (Deutschland) akzeptierst. Ich bin ab Sonntag in USA. Also.. wenn Du's haben moechtest, dann schicke mir eine mail und ich schick's dann zurueck.

Hi Mbelieve,

thanks for your feedback. I will take your advice and good luck for you too.