Scubadiva Profile Reviews (11)

RE: searching for woman of my life in Germany Bayern

You might correct the English and perhaps add a statement saying that you speak German (if you do) or add a sentence or two in German since you're specifically looking in Germany. Good luck.

RE: Please review..need to know why I am being pursued

Why are you pursued? Because you are here and that makes you an "opportunity". The more honest you appear, the greater a target you become.

Regarding the profile: In my opinion, it would be good to remove one sentence or restate it. "... the jungle seemingly..etc.". It is grammatically incorrect and the word "seemingly" doesn't belong there. I'd also remove the "..." in various places and construct complete sentences instead. Other than that, it looks fine :-) Good luck.

RE: check this out!

The first thing that struck me is that your first sentence is: I'm fun and friendly, yet your photo says exactly the opposite I'm not kidding. You should either put a picture up where you smile or otherwise convey friendliness/fun, or rewrite the sentence.

The second thing that struck me was the use of the letter "n" instead of the word "and." I imagine you did it to be hip or perhaps to have the reader read as if they were listening to you speak, but without sounding too --, it looks a bit "teenager" to me.

Nothing you say makes you look desperate, by the way.

RE: what is wrong in this world?

Ich habe Dir einen review geschrieben (bzw das ganze Profil), aber kann Dir das nicht via cs email schicken weil Du keine Post von dieser Region (Deutschland) akzeptierst. Ich bin ab Sonntag in USA. Also.. wenn Du's haben moechtest, dann schicke mir eine mail und ich schick's dann zurueck.

RE: what is wrong in this world?

How do I say this nicely... The first thing that I noticed is that you used the word "ogre" to describe women who you do not find attractive.

If your education and intelligence are above average, as you claim, then you ought to know better than to describe those people who you personally find unattractive by such a term. Moreover, you might want to correct your English. Grammatical errors are not a sign of an above average education.

You conclude that a person who moves furniture a lot also does not know what she wants in life. Okay Doctor Freud, I trust you have enough empirical evidence to support your theory By your logic, a person who makes grammatical errors due to carlessness (if not due to ignorance) must not be too interested in seriously finding a partner.

Any woman who is reasonably intelligent and not an ogre will notice what I noticed and simply on the basis of those points dismiss your profile.

My suggestion is to rethink and rewrite the whole thing.

RE: I think I have emailed everyone in my state! LOL!

Yeah well, don't sweat those. I have marriage proposals from half of the African continent, India and the Middle East ... must be something about us big white women

But seriously, I'd expand my search to the neighboring states and keep an open mind to the serious women from further away. Get mailing! and good luck

RE: I think I have emailed everyone in my state! LOL!

LOL.. Man, I'm from Jersey/NYC. but I think you could do worse than to give those ladies from overseas a shot if things don't pan out in Oooohioooo.

RE: I think I have emailed everyone in my state! LOL!

Much better!

Good luck!

RE: I think I have emailed everyone in my state! LOL!

The headline is definitely funny!! Made me chuckle, to be sure.

I don't see anything wrong with your profile really. I think maybe the photo with the grey t-shirt and those weird shorts isn't very flattering, but the main picture is nice.

Try Michigan perhaps?

RE: anything that can be improved on profile

Can't really see anything wrong with your profile. If pressed hard, I might wonder about the rollover in one of the pictures thinking that the lady might be your "misspecial," basically whether you already have a lady in your life. Some woman might wonder about that because you're not saying in the profile that those are all pictures from meets.

Good luck.

RE: nobody replies

why? ... because I'm another old bag