I don't mean to be rude but judging by what you have posted so far in your own ''Profile Review'' you seem to be very inmature, for a 43 year old man and that doesn't help your cause.
Most women like men with personality and determination like someone said in one of the coments, in addition to that girls prefer to be reached at an emotional level before anything else.
Try to rewrite your profile or if possible delete your ''Profile Review'' and start over. Good luck and consider that you asked for opinions !