Hi Finnster! For the life of me, I can't figure out why a LOT of young ladies haven't viewed your profile. So, I will start it off.
You are a very handsome guy and your pictures are great. So don't change any of your photos. However, I might suggest you change your profile picture to the one where you are smiling. OMG you look so hot in that one!
As far as your narrative, you need some work on that. Half the secret of finding that "special someone," is selling yourself in your profile. Yours doesn't do that. I'm absolutely sure that you have so much more to offer than what you wrote.
Give a demonstration of your sensitivity and openness by speaking from the heart. You can do it!! Pretend you are looking into the eyes of a woman that you truly care for and want to let her know how much you care.
That's all I got for you. I will be anxious to see what you come up with!
I have one suggestion. If you have trouble with English, maybe you should say so in your profile. I say this because what you wrote in your thread, makes no sense whatsoever. If it's just a language gap, it would be best to say so. Otherwise, it could be interpreted as your being unintelligent.
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Hi Finnster! For the life of me, I can't figure out why a LOT of young ladies haven't viewed your profile. So, I will start it off.You are a very handsome guy and your pictures are great. So don't change any of your photos. However, I might suggest you change your profile picture to the one where you are smiling. OMG you look so hot in that one!
As far as your narrative, you need some work on that. Half the secret of finding that "special someone," is selling yourself in your profile. Yours doesn't do that. I'm absolutely sure that you have so much more to offer than what you wrote.
Give a demonstration of your sensitivity and openness by speaking from the heart. You can do it!! Pretend you are looking into the eyes of a woman that you truly care for and want to let her know how much you care.
That's all I got for you. I will be anxious to see what you come up with!
TTYL