not a bad profile :) i would add more things you like to do tho as you are looking for someone that does the things you do.. but the very few that you mentioned are great. :)
cute dimple on the smile image :) should move that to the front and catch some attention with it.. many ladies like dimples ;)
only 2 comments to make... not enough info about you so i can start a conversation.. you leave me clueless about a common interest to talk about.... and the one comment about you being nothing special sets off a red flag saying you dont have any confidence in yourself.
you asked for a few tips to help you out and perhaps get more messages
your commentary about yourself is not very much.. i know its hard to speak about yourself and things you like, but us ladies like reading about things, try expanding on that.
also, in the partner you are looking for, one line in particular caught my attention and threw up a "move on response" .. it was the part you mentioned that she must bring you joy and happiness etc ... to women, that may appear like you are searching for a lady to make you happy and keep you happy... not someone that you wish to share great times with and make new times of joy and happiness together.
i would like to see a main picture of you smiling. the picture of you relaxing is great but not what i expect to see as a first impression visiting your page.
and yes even a few small hints of things you like can bring in a few more messages.
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RE: review my profile
not a bad profile :)i would add more things you like to do tho as you are looking for someone that does the things you do.. but the very few that you mentioned are great. :)