Hyperu Profile Reviews (31)

This is a list of Profile Reviews created by Hyperu

Feb 3, 2014

RE: Prince Charming Himself

Your first picture is excellent! You have a good clean cut appearance. I would delete the other three. You need to revise the grammar content, but the substance of what you had to say is good. I liked your concern for natural resouce conservation. Good Luck!

Feb 3, 2014

RE: I prefer men from Switzerland

Good profile. I would strongly suggest a picture! Good Luck!

Feb 3, 2014

RE: seeking older women

Hogen you need a native English speaker to revise your profile. I would suggest more info concerning your hobbies and dislikes. Hogen lets be honest, the ladies on this site act like they are god's gift to mankind. You state that you are an artist and unemployed. Maybe in 20 years you might get a letter. Good Luck!

Feb 3, 2014

RE: AMBW?

Sorry, meant 4 and 5.

Feb 3, 2014

RE: How do I rate?

Great pictures! Very well written profile. Good Luck!

Feb 3, 2014

RE: hi

Jomcy! Good pictures but I would delete the bottom center because it looks like a mug shot. Your second profile essay needs to be revised. Most non native English speakers would not understand it. Good Luck!

Feb 3, 2014

RE: I love to love and be loved.

Good Pictures! Your profile is OK, but I would have a native English speaker revise it. Good Luck!

Feb 3, 2014

RE: in searching of my life partner...

Great photos, especially the ones with your jacket on. I would write more about my hobbies and dislikes. Good Luck!

Feb 3, 2014

RE: I want to meet a mature woman for relationship..

Valenti! You need to have a native English speaker revise your introduction. It is hard to understand. I would be more honest about your disability and explain it fully. Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: First time

I would suggest another picture. There is a shadow over your face and your mobile phone distorts your image. Well written profile.

Feb 2, 2014

RE: Hey buddies

EXCELLENT!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: FRIEND SHIP FOR ALL

Maybe another picture would help out. This one looks like a mug shot. Maybe more facts about your hobbies and interest. I would suggest some more facts to help out a prospective lady. Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: Hi I'm new to this...be my freind....

There are many tourist books and internet sites you can visit for tourist information. Little hint,Tyrconnel is surely one of the top single malt whiskeys to drink! Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: Bonjour!

Hi! First, a picture is needed. Honestly, I would suggest another internet site which caters to Muslim people.There are many free sites to visit. Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: I need your opinion ... something is wrong

Great Photos! Smiling and happy! If English is not your native language,try both English and German. I would suggest more facts about your hobbies and dislikes. There are some mistakes in Grammar and maybe you could have one of your English buddies help you out. Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: callmeboots

Boots, many grammar and spelling errors. You need to tell men more about yourself. Your hobbies and dislikes.You are not a spring chicken(neither am I) but you need to dress up you profile and appear to be an eagle. Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: ...for every young

I undersood your profile, but I am well educated. The average John Doe would not get through the first two lines. Just a few grammar mistakes, but too wordy. You need to make it easy for everyone to read. Good photo. Good Luck! C

Feb 2, 2014

RE: New to this online dating

First, good photos! You need to revise your text. There are too many mistakes in grammar. Dump the model collection and try to talk about something biker girls like, ie tatoos. Good Luck! C

Feb 2, 2014

RE: am mr cooll_chris

Cooll......More facts! What you wrote is so generic!You seems to be a handsome guy. Get rid of the hat! Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: Is there someone who is there to connect with??

Almost a great short introduction. I liked "But I am definitely not one of those boring or pushy guys you must be meeting here every now and then." You need to have some grammar points rechecked. More information is needed about yourself. Good Luck! B-

Feb 2, 2014

RE: wt bout me

Your review is too generic! You are competing with thousands of other swinging earlobes. You must emphasis why you are different and why you are the right person. Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: how does it come across?

Excellent! Your message was loud and clear. Just a personal point, I would not publish my income, too many gold diggers on this site.Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: come onboard

What you wrote is so generic! You have a college education;
use it! Your job and location seems so exciting; write about them! Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: yeaXe MuKhTaR

If you are to be taken seriously by any person, the entire profile needs to be rewritten. It needs facts and ideas. Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: hi i want hyderbad women or girl

Need to completely rewrite if you are serious. Have some friends help you out.

Feb 2, 2014

RE: cute

Cute you need to touch up your grammar points. Your message will not be understood by everyone, unless they are a native speaker.
Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: new one

I liked it very much. The best part was the bird watching. This profile was down to earth. A+

Feb 2, 2014

RE: I'm pretty new to this online dating site

OK, but you need to have your profile edited. Good Luck.

Feb 2, 2014

RE: What do you think about me ?

Basically a good profile with just a litte editing needed. From Greece? You should have no problem!Good Luck!

Feb 2, 2014

RE: I m also new on here...

Profile is OK

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