The only change I can suggest has to do with the pictures. Although the pics of the Koala and the dogs are "cute" they are not pics of you. Same with the the one with your grandson. Women might find those pics appealing. Men will not. Pics of young children should not ever be included on a dating website. There are people that look for those pics just to date the women so they can have access to the children.
Use capitalization. The word "I" should be upper case. The first word of every sentence should be capitalized. The lack of capitalization makes you look lazy. If you are too lazy to use capitalization that makes me wonder if you are a lazy person.
This goes for everyone, black and white pics may look great but they hide the real you. What I mean is, they hide the wrinkles and creases that are the real you. Get a couple of full body shots. You state "average" in your stats but every one has a different idea as to what average is.
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RE: Alway remember......
Do not use text speak in your profile. Makes it read like a 12 year old wrote it.