window pane

As i sit here looking at the rain staring through my window pane i feel just sorrow and no glee sometimes i feel theres nothing left inside of me, As i sit here staring through the window pane looking out towards the rain hopeing the sun well make me change knowing how much i hate this delicate frame.The sun came out but i did not change and once again came back the rain and so i sit here knowing it doesn't matter if its sun or rain the pain i feel will never change , And once again im alone to stare at the rain sitting here looking through my window pane...........by R.W.R
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applause LoveLy VeRy VeRy NiCe writing.. lots of meaningful sensation that give the reader to feel them and live in that siuation..

go ahead and don't stop

regards;
muneera
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applause LoveLy VeRy VeRy NiCe writing.. lots of meaningful sensation that give the reader to feel them and live in that siuation..

go ahead and don't stop

regards;
muneera
yay cheering
beautiful...you have a lot of talent. [:
Darling you have your whole life ahead of you, i get blue too, but if we can make ourselves get up in the morning and say this is going to be a great day. be thankful we even woke up. i should practice what i preach, but i am concerned for you and want you to be happy. you are a handsome man and i dont want you to hurt. there will always be pain and if i can be of help, i will be your bandaid.angel
oh, did i just totally read that and think you were lonely. the other responses seemed to refer to your writing, i was embracing your pain, so that should let you know that it was effectivelaugh laugh
please dont feel sad i just write that way sometimes it was for my ex who passed away its how i feel with her gone but your very kind thank youhandshake
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