help with my profile please thanks so much (16)

Nov 20, 2012 6:08 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
markroche
markrochemarkrochecarlow, Carlow Ireland4 Threads 7 Posts
so u girls what do u think of my profile over all score me out of 10 please and tell me if i am good looking out of 10 too. and is there any thing i cud write up on it
Nov 20, 2012 6:11 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
You could put up a couple of pics like erocticguy has up. That will get the womens attention!!
Nov 20, 2012 6:13 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
Laceylou
LaceylouLaceylouSligo, Ireland7 Threads 173 Posts
markroche: so u girls what do u think of my profile over all score me out of 10 please and tell me if i am good looking out of 10 too. and is there any thing i cud write up on it


Can't rate your photos as they are all too distant.....love the dog though wink

Your profile comes across as "needy", but that's just my opinion, oh and a bit of punctuation would make it a lot easier to read grin
Nov 20, 2012 6:16 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
markroche
markrochemarkrochecarlow, Carlow Ireland4 Threads 7 Posts
what do u mean when u say puncluation. i dont understand. what u mean the photos are to distant. u mean a bit far away from camera is it
Nov 20, 2012 6:19 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
jenny68
jenny68jenny68Kildare, Dublin Ireland14 Threads 1,375 Posts
It does come across as a little desperate...Pull it back a little...And yes punctuation is needed...Its like trying to read without taking a breath...
Nov 20, 2012 6:20 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
Green_Sleeves
Green_SleevesGreen_SleevesCarlow, Ireland174 Threads 37 Polls 4,812 Posts
markroche: what do u mean when u say puncluation. i dont understand. what u mean the photos are to distant. u mean a bit far away from camera is it


Theres only one vital piece of help I can offer you, remove the 'Carlow' bit from your location, the womens have no time for Carlaaaa mens crying laugh
Nov 20, 2012 6:21 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
Green_Sleeves
Green_SleevesGreen_SleevesCarlow, Ireland174 Threads 37 Polls 4,812 Posts
jenny68: It does come across as a little desperate...Pull it back a little...And yes punctuation is needed...Its like trying to read without taking a breath...


Hello sweet angel sent down from above..marriage?? bouquet

laugh
Nov 20, 2012 6:23 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
Laceylou
LaceylouLaceylouSligo, Ireland7 Threads 173 Posts
markroche: what do u mean when u say puncluation. i dont understand. what u mean the photos are to distant. u mean a bit far away from camera is it


Punctuation as in . , : ; etc.....

Yeah, you are too far away from the camera, and in your main pic, you don't say which one is you confused
Nov 20, 2012 6:23 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
markroche
markrochemarkrochecarlow, Carlow Ireland4 Threads 7 Posts
which way cud i put it that it does not sound desperate
Nov 20, 2012 6:26 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
jenny68
jenny68jenny68Kildare, Dublin Ireland14 Threads 1,375 Posts
Green_Sleeves: Hello sweet angel sent down from above..marriage??


rolling on the floor laughing
Nov 20, 2012 6:29 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
Green_Sleeves
Green_SleevesGreen_SleevesCarlow, Ireland174 Threads 37 Polls 4,812 Posts
markroche: which way cud i put it that it does not sound desperate


Stop saying how nice you are how how good you'll treat a lady, them bee-atches dont wanna be hearing that, they want a bloke thats gonna treat 'em mean and keep 'em keep! Keeps them on their toes, keeps 'em eager and wanting more. They dont want a nice sweety pie guy; even if you are that, but dont wear it on your sleeve, keep that in reserve.

Just talk about yourself without all the 'I need a GF!!!' vibes, that's gonna scare them right off!! uh oh
Nov 20, 2012 6:32 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
jenny68
jenny68jenny68Kildare, Dublin Ireland14 Threads 1,375 Posts
ah something along the lines of....would like to meet for a drink or dinner or something and if you click take it from there...atm it sounds a bit like you might handcuff them to u to stop them getting away...
Nov 20, 2012 6:38 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
markroche
markrochemarkrochecarlow, Carlow Ireland4 Threads 7 Posts
i changed it a bit now is it a bit better
Nov 20, 2012 6:43 PM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
Laceylou
LaceylouLaceylouSligo, Ireland7 Threads 173 Posts
markroche: i changed it a bit now is it a bit better


Much better thumbs up

Good luck on your search
Nov 21, 2012 10:57 AM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
Maybe get a few business cards made up and offer them to people?? i hear that's all the rage these days giggle
Nov 21, 2012 11:01 AM CST help with my profile please thanks so much
IWILLTEASEYOU
IWILLTEASEYOUIWILLTEASEYOUTIPPERARY, Tipperary Ireland59 Threads 1 Polls 933 Posts
mcattack: Maybe get a few business cards made up and offer them to people?? i hear that's all the rage these days
laugh
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