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Nov 21, 2006 11:29 AM CST when you
zdeadmanwalking
zdeadmanwalkingzdeadmanwalkingbowling green, Kentucky USA235 Threads 3,011 Posts
sometimes in life
you will meet someone
without knowing their name
without knowing where they came from


when you give
up on love
when you think
you can never
find love again
they show up
through them you
will understand the
true meaning of love

you will know
they are the one
you have been
searching for
in time you
will understand
your search is
over for you
had found true love
after all


when you look
into their eyes
when they hold
you in their arms
when you feel
their heart beat
aginst yours



you will know
and understand
there is no reason
to be afraid
with each beat
of their heart


they will make your
fears go away
your fears will
be replace by
true love which
in true love
there is no fear





you will not
know why they
came into your life
in time you
will stop asking why
for you are
thankful they have
came into your life



they will be unlike
any other person
you have meet before
they will be the one
who you can talk
to about anything


they will not
only touch your heart
but they will
touch your soul
unlike anyone else
has done before

they will understand you
unlike anyone else has
they will know
what your dreams
are and help
you to make them
come true


they will not
only knows what
your heart holds
but they will
know what your
soul holds





it will seen like
they are a angel
from heaven
sent to watch over you


for in your darkest times
when you have lost
all hope of a better tomorrow
they will be there
to light your way
they will be there
to help you to
get your hope
back for a better tomorrow
no matter what
tomorrow brings they
will be there by your side
helping you to get through it



they will love you
for who you are
and not for who you are not
they will love you
for who you are
they will not
try to change you
into something
they want you to be
but they will
only love you
for who you are



when it seens
like everything in
life goes wrong
and you do not
feel like going on
they will be there
to help you to go on


when it seens
like everyone else
has walked out
on you
they will walk in
they will forever be
by your side no matter



what ever tomorrow may bring
they will be there
to help you get through it
when the bad
times comes they
will be there
to help you
get through them


when life makes
you cry they
will be there
to wipe your
tears away with
tender loving care
for once they have walked in
they will never walk out



for they will have
arms to hold you
at your weakness
through the love
they have for you
you will become
strong once more


when you have
falling and don't
want to get up
they will be
there to lift you up


they will love you
at your worst
they will even
love you when
you think you
do not deserve it


no matter what
you do or say
to them they
will still love you
for true love
knows no one
is prefect


true love knows
everyone has their faults
true love does
not end cause
you are being a a**hole
but true love
over looks when
you are being a**hole


when you understand
that no matter what
tomorrow brings
through the good times
and bad times
they will be there for you


when you are
at your worst
when you are
at your beat
they will still love you


when you are
being sweet
or you being a a**hole
they will still love you


no matter what
you do to them
no matter what
you say to them
they will still love you


when you understand
all of this
did you will
understand you had
found true love after all
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Nov 21, 2006 11:30 AM CST when you
FindMe1113
FindMe1113FindMe1113Bronx, USA11 Threads 1,171 Posts
Very, very SWEET!angel
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Nov 21, 2006 11:37 AM CST when you
nuala
nualanualadublin, Dublin Ireland12 Threads 6,456 Posts
as usual you just keep them masterpieces rolling out that was beautiful thank you zdeadmanwalking......!!
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Nov 21, 2006 11:37 AM CST when you
mixxy
mixxymixxyrockdale, Texas USA3 Threads 229 Posts
that was beautiful Z thank you for sharingangel hug hug smitten
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Nov 21, 2006 11:38 AM CST when you
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
Very nice Z...
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Nov 21, 2006 11:40 AM CST when you
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
Excellent work from a poetic man, indeed thumbs up
hug cheers
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Nov 21, 2006 11:43 AM CST when you
Butterfly
ButterflyButterflyMobile, Alabama USA3 Threads 852 Posts
Thank You Sweetie, those are very beautiful and true sentiments. I want you to promise me you will take your own words to heart. hug
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Nov 21, 2006 12:29 PM CST when you
Z, Your heart is speaking in a way no other heart can. We must
always remember to grab that love when it stands before us and
never let it go. If we take time to question it we may lose it.
Always be proud of who we are and listen to what the Great Spirit
is whispering to our heart. Never question, just listen with
our minds and hearts open. You are truly a great person, like an
eagle who flies so proudly. Miss you, take care.hug
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Nov 21, 2006 2:47 PM CST when you
Caribbeanstyle
CaribbeanstyleCaribbeanstyleSan Juan, Puerto Rico1 Threads 379 Posts
Love it



thumbs up thumbs up
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Nov 21, 2006 3:33 PM CST when you
SouthernYankee
SouthernYankeeSouthernYankeeFayetteville, North Carolina USA7 Threads 480 Posts
It was great!
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Nov 21, 2006 4:18 PM CST when you
zdeadmanwalking
zdeadmanwalkingzdeadmanwalkingbowling green, Kentucky USA235 Threads 3,011 Posts
angel blushing hug
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Nov 21, 2006 4:19 PM CST when you
SimonCowellsMum
SimonCowellsMumSimonCowellsMum25 Threads 249 Posts
yawn
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Nov 21, 2006 4:21 PM CST when you
SimonCowellsMum
SimonCowellsMumSimonCowellsMum25 Threads 249 Posts
sleep sleep sleep sleep
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Nov 21, 2006 4:25 PM CST when you
SimonCowellsMum
SimonCowellsMumSimonCowellsMum25 Threads 249 Posts
PLEASE GIVE UP zdeadmanwalking
YOUR POEMS ARE NOT ALL THAT GOOD they do not scan well nor do they have the correct timbre to be grat in fact they are bloody boring and samey........most of the praise the gather is from uneducated folk who would not know good from bad.. just cos you mention lots of lovey dowy cliches does not mean you are a poetbarf
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Nov 21, 2006 4:38 PM CST when you
IrishLass1
IrishLass1IrishLass1Metairie, USA71 Threads 1,998 Posts
Art in one person's eyes may not be art in another person's eyes. Do you insult what you do not understand and belittle those of a different understanding, or should you remain silent and let those of understanding enjoy something to it's fullest? An educated person usually has the tact not to insult!
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Nov 21, 2006 4:42 PM CST when you
SimonCowellsMum
SimonCowellsMumSimonCowellsMum25 Threads 249 Posts
was not insulting him, oh big ego,, i was mereluy offering my opinion and in my opinion he is no poet
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Nov 21, 2006 4:48 PM CST when you
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
sorta like copy and paste ansi art, eh?

that was mean..
I'm glad Z is still here=o)
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Nov 21, 2006 4:51 PM CST when you
SimonCowellsMum
SimonCowellsMumSimonCowellsMum25 Threads 249 Posts
Don't you realize that there are enough people to hate in the world already without your working so hard to give us another?
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Nov 21, 2006 4:54 PM CST when you
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Ahhh, Hugs to ya.
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Nov 21, 2006 4:55 PM CST when you
SimonCowellsMum
SimonCowellsMumSimonCowellsMum25 Threads 249 Posts
he may be worth more respect if he didnt write to every woman on site telling them they are angels ..silly boy
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