Poem's you have written for someone special. (12)

Dec 11, 2006 7:37 PM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
superdougie11
superdougie11superdougie11Edmonton, Canada40 Threads 533 Posts
A poem for my adopted mom.

You have alway's been there for me,
Since the young age of 3.
I felt I belonged even when I had wronged,
Your house was a home to me!
My life could have been different without a doubt,
I'm glad you were there to help me out.
And now that you're sick and possibly dying,
My gut's in a knot and I feel like crying.
I wrote this poem to express how I feel,
Because for you my only mom the love is real.

I've never been a poet but I wrote this for my adopted mom who is currently battling cancer in Lindsay Ontario. Has anyone in your life inspired you to write? If so, please feel free to share!
Dec 11, 2006 9:28 PM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
snowmouse
snowmousesnowmousewinnipeg, Manitoba Canada15 Threads 189 Posts
ok that me cry .....very nice hon
Dec 11, 2006 10:23 PM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
superdougie11
superdougie11superdougie11Edmonton, Canada40 Threads 533 Posts
Thanks snowmouse. It really did come straight from my heart!blushing
Dec 12, 2006 4:52 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
Spagooch
SpagoochSpagoochSt. Catharines, Canada21 Threads 387 Posts
Im posting a poem/short story I wrote a few years ago. Never published but have publically read at cafe's and such locally. It's in 6 interludes + an epilogue. Sorry for the size, thats why it's in the next 4 posts.


Rene
Dec 12, 2006 4:54 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
Spagooch
SpagoochSpagoochSt. Catharines, Canada21 Threads 387 Posts
The Pool

First Interlude: The Chase

Emerging from the East, the lady enters the forest with the rising sun.
Hair billowing, face alight...red and seeking.
A cold wind blows.

To herself, lips unmoving, she asks...”Where is the place I belong?”
Above, a hawk screeches through the morning’s dissipating mist.
At the forest’s edge, a doe sniffs the air... startled.
The doe senses the woman’s presence.

The doe...”Mother Doe”, hears the woman’s longing quest...her desolation.
“Where is the place that I belong?” asks the woman again, bewildered.
Again the hawk screeches.
The Lady’s heart jumps...she stops.

The Doe, quick flash of white tail in the distance, then gone.
The Lady’s eyes try to follow but cannot.
Doe leaps into the forest’s depths.

At the circling hawk, high above, the Lady gasps at it’s soaring beauty.
The Hawk, gazing below...gasps at her soaring beauty.
Their eyes meet in understanding, the Lady knows to follow.
Into the forest she drifts.

The scent of pine and damp moss encircle her.
Nostrils flaring...she feels alive.
Alive...as if in a dream.
Could it be true?...Could it?

The Lady follows, not knowing who, or why.
Her way, lit dimly by the breaking dawn.
The stirring in her heart her only guide, she walks on.

White gown, green woolen cape.
The earth, cold on her sandaled feet.
Breasts gently rise and fall as she catches her breath.

The Forest Beckons...



Second Interlude: In The Glade

The Doe flags her tail, as if a beacon.
The Woman plunges into the gloom, after her.
Thorns and branches tear at her skin, the Woman cries out in pain.
...Blood flows.

Doe is elusive, our Lady angers.
In her mind she screams... “WHERE are you leading me? TELL me my quest!”
Hearing no reply, she grunts and stumbles onward.

Ahead...sunlight bathes a small glade in the dark forest.
Pushing through the thick brambles, the Lady heads for it.
Bursting into the clearing, she shouts in shock and amazement at what she sees before her.
The Doe... who is resting gently by a spring-fed pool, raises her head in welcome.

Stopping , the Lady cries aloud, “Why didn’t you stop when I called out to you?”
“Speak not with your voice”, answers the Doe...and adds thoughtfully:
“Your heart speaks loudly enough Woman, though you yourself do not even know this yet”.

The Lady stands bewildered...sweat mixes with earth.
Her face...dirty and smudged with the forest.
...Exhaustion.

“Who are you?”, pleads the Lady. “How is it that you speak to me in this way?”
Rising to her feet, Doe; “I’am the Mother of this forest and you wandered into it’s reaches”.

Again ...”Where is the place that I belong Mother?”, asks the Lady>
Softly, falling snow melts silently in the pool between them.
“First...you must bathe”, replies Doe.
The wind has risen and howls mournfully though the forest canopy above.

Grey clouds, menacingly low, slowly fill the sky.
Breath to steam...”It is cold”, the lady thinks, gazing into the pool.
The Lady tells Doe; “Snow flies...I will surely freeze in that pool”.
“Are you not already frozen”, replies Doe afirmingly.
“Iam afraid” the Woman softly pleads.

Silently...sadly, the Woman knows what she must do.
Cape and robe fall at her feet.
Standing naked at the pool’s edge, the Lady shivers, her resistance crumbles.
“Is it...is it truly over”? She asks...eyes beseeching.
Dec 12, 2006 5:00 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
Spagooch
SpagoochSpagoochSt. Catharines, Canada21 Threads 387 Posts
6th Interlude cont.


The Girl begins to sob loudly…sobs turn quickly to wails.
Steam rises from the now hot, almost scalding water.
Thrashing loose from the Lady’s grasp, the Girl pounds her fists into the pool…
“…NO,NO,NO,NO, DON’T TOUCH ME! – Please STOP…STOOOOP!”, the Girl shrieks.

Weeping for the Girl’s pain, the Lady does nothing to comfort the girl, “This is her journey”.
The Lady climbs unnoticed from the pool and leaves the Girl to her sorrows.
Silently…slowly, the Lady dresses and gathers sticks for the Girls warming fire.
Briefly warming herself, the Lady walks from the glade and into the gloom of the forest.

Overhead, She-hawk screeches her approval…the circle is complete.
The Lady’s healing is at it’s finish.
“I am ready again”, smiles the Lady.
The Lady turns West and begins to walk.
Dec 12, 2006 5:01 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
Spagooch
SpagoochSpagoochSt. Catharines, Canada21 Threads 387 Posts
Epilogue:


The Girl opens her eyes, exhausted, and slowly climbs out of the pool.
Turning, she lets out a sharp cry.
The Doe with the bleeding foreleg was gone!
In the place where the wounded Doe just was…a small fire blazes cozily.

With soft boughs and leaves of aloe vera, the Girl dries herself slowly…deliberately.
Her skin smooth and supple, the Girl smells her own womanly scent and sighs softly.
As if in a dream…the Girl dresses and rests by the fire.

After a time, the Girl rises and walks from the glade and into the forest’s gloom.
The Girl walks radiantly assured…her pace quickening.
A flash of white tail in the distance…then gone.
An unseen Hawk screeches in the distance… gazing skyward, the Girl smiles.








The End

Thank you for your patience.
Dec 13, 2006 8:47 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
Spagooch
SpagoochSpagoochSt. Catharines, Canada21 Threads 387 Posts
Hair…the colour of a gentle moonrise.
Your softness becomes you…


Skin…like alabaster,a graceful cameo.
Your softness becomes you…


Smile…a vibrant sunburst, envelopes your entirety.
Your softness becomes you.


May rainbows be about you.
Dec 17, 2006 9:09 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
CarchMe1962
CarchMe1962CarchMe1962Brockville, Ontario Canada10 Threads 62 Posts
Some Friends will


Some friends will come and go
But a true friend will take it slow
And by doing this, it will show
Some friends will.


L.E.M
Dec 17, 2006 9:14 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
CarchMe1962
CarchMe1962CarchMe1962Brockville, Ontario Canada10 Threads 62 Posts
Some Friends will


Some friends will come and go
But a true friend will take it slow
And by doing this, it will show
Some friends will.


L.E.M
Dec 17, 2006 9:14 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
CarchMe1962
CarchMe1962CarchMe1962Brockville, Ontario Canada10 Threads 62 Posts
Thoughts of Me

Thoughts of me,
Like the maple leafs on a tree
Thoughts of me make feelings warm
Like a buttery cob of corn

Thoughts of me seem so far
Unlike a kid with a candy bar
Under a watchful eye
Never to far

Thoughts of me
May make you cry
And if it does
I wonder why

Thoughts of me
Will never die
Just like a monarch butterfly
Or the clouds in the sky

Thoughts of me
May come and go
Like a kid with a yo yo
Always ready to go

If thoughts of me
Bring tears to you
It’s the thought
Because the truth was not

Thoughts of me
Began to fade
Like bugs scattering from a can of raid
But remember this

They are all thoughts of me


Part 1
Dec 17, 2006 9:16 AM CST Poem's you have written for someone special.
CarchMe1962
CarchMe1962CarchMe1962Brockville, Ontario Canada10 Threads 62 Posts
Thoughts of me


When I think about thoughts of me
It makes me shake right down to my knee
And at times it makes me want to flee
Down to the kitchen for a green tea.


Thoughts of me should be all good
Like a nice piece of Cherry wood
If thoughts of me make you said
Come for a hug that will make u glad

Thoughts of me may cause a stare
But stop and think and then beware
As the heart unfolds into 2
It will make you think about you.


Have warm thought of me

L.EMC


Part 2
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